LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC -THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL - SECTION 20
Only a handful of Elders of Karn and His Eminence Olavingemar had been privy to Aegeus’s secret, that Chandor (Zandar Kuntzu) and his offspring (twin son) Zonar, were both related to Aegeus by blood, and now it seemed, through his carelessness, the secret had been revealed to ambitious Sthetor as well. Aegeus put this concern aside and directed his attention instead, on the matter at hand.
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| 01- AEGEUS (1)B JP |
What made Zonar even more hazardous, was the fact that his blood also carried the mixed gene (although it was dormant) from his Immortal mother Tekubzan. She, the only daughter of His Eminence Olavingemar, had the rare phoenix chromosome, which had, once in every aeon, passed down to female genera of Kongrul. Zonar’s twin sister Arnora (also known as Ingrit) had died young, well before it could be determined whether she had the gene or not. The rare Phoenix genetic material (chromosome, DNA) once manifested at maturity, at about thirty-five, from then on would enable the immortal female to transform, at will, into a phoenix or into a phoenix/human hybrid. Such a being also, via the blue flames, would possess immense regenerative healing powers. They could utilize their power to heal or harm anyone, even Immortals.
Elder Aegeus had learned quite by
chance, through divination, that Nevetsecnuac had also twins born to him some
time prior; and one being female, she could carry that gene. He had kept this
secret from all, while he decided on what this would entail and if it warranted
any future action. He did not know why but an innate caution deep within, had
kept him weary of Sthetor, and decidedly silent on this matter as he wish to keep
Sthetor in the dark about this.
The ancient race of Kongruls, despite the immeasurable
distance, once had a kinship (alliance, special link), with the race of Karn.
Unfortunately, the revered race of Kongruls had virtually been annihilated
during the cataclysmic wars, save for the three (that Aegeus knew of): His
Eminence Olavingemar, his precious daughter Tekubzan, and of course,
Sthetor. All three-surviving Kongruls, had been readily and
without prejudice (generously) accepted into the main fold of, Karn race.
Moreover, in a noticeably abbreviated time, both, benevolent Oavingemar and
(problematic) Sthetor had achieved prominent positions.
Notwithstanding
their different prior status in Kongrul Race, for Olavingemar had been a
venerated, intellectual aristocrat whereas Sthetor had been an ordinary, (rigid,
obdurate) intransigent warrior and a seir (diviner). The two had outwardly been
congenial (affable) towards each other and, often cooperated on pressing
matters; but underneath it all, Aegeus had sensed (detected)from the very
beginning, the enduring (lifelong, unwavering) hostility between Olavingemar
and Sthetor. They were, moreover, as different as day and night. This
aggression had reached its zenith once, when in a private meeting between the
three honoured Elders of Karn, Aegeus, Olavingemar and Sthetor, audacious
Sthetor (who was Olavingemar’s age but didn’t show it) had proposed to wed
Tekubzan when she had reached the age of maturity, to perpetuate their race.
She was no more than (earth-years of) four at the time.
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| 02-- STHETOR IMMORTAL (16)JP |
Olavingemar barely able to contain his ire (indignation, wrath), he had simply bolted from his seat and, without a word, left the meeting. Things were supposed to have been smoothed later, but Aegeus had remained doubtful of the validity of that claim. Furthermore, from then on Olavingemar had remained guarded against Sthetor. Aegeus, nevertheless, not wishing to pry (meddle), had not broached the subject with either of them.
Then hundred years later, at a
typical Divination Ceremony where, each new generation at the age of ten Earth
years was evaluated, His Eminence Olavingemar the Most Supreme Elder of Karn
Race, assisted by Sthetor , had disclosed then manifest ominous prediction that,
the child Tekubzan was unfortunately, the carrier of a seed that would be the
harbinger of the Race of Karn’s utter obliteration (eradication). To prevent
this from ever happening, by a majority vote, she had been in a fortnight,
condemned to death.
His Eminence Olavigemar, nevertheless,
privately that night had reconsulted the Heavens and, achieving a different
interpretation as well, an alternative to the execution, she had been instead,
sentenced to a much crueler fate of being imprisoned for life at a secret
location, behind an impenetrable one piece of solid rock, where which its
thickness muted all sound, inside one of the divisions (tunnels) of the deepest
recesses of the Cave. There she was left to live, the rest of her long life, in
solitary confinement and in pitch darkness.
Secrecy being paramount,
Olavigemar and Aegeus had been the sole ones that knew the whereabouts of her
prison. At least she would be alive. Elders of Karn being habitually indifferent
(apathetic), they had all agreed to this, save for Sthetor. Aegeus had seen his
ugly side then, especially when latter’s arguments had been superseded
(overridden). More importantly, Aegeus had detected just for a spell before
Sthetor had supplanted it (replaced, masked), the hint of his unease in his eye-
the almost feeling of foreboding or fear- at his inability to affect her
immediate demise.
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| 03-HIS EMINENCE OLAVINGEMAR (2)JP |
Olavigemar meanwhile, though relieved, from then on had been unusually tight-lipped and he had never mentioned or reminisced about his beloved daughter; furthermore, he had avoided, all communication (clairvoyantly) telepathically or otherwise with her. But despite the great passage of time, he had not, not once, forsaken Tekubzan.
This Aegeous had known for certain
and chosen to remain silent. Aegeus likewise discerned, that Olavigemar had
kept her life-stone along with his, in a secret compartment, somewhere in his
room. Life-stones had been an essential part of life in Kongrus. One year after
birth, each Kongrus received a singular, unique small stone (the kind only
found in Kongrus’s homeland, Tarkon), which, in a specific ceremony, on the
second full moon of the year, their drop of blood was absorbed by the stone,
turning it into luminescent celadon color. So long as it glowed celadon, the
individual was believed to be still among the living. Since her imprisonment,
Olavigemar each night before going to sleep, without fail, had checked his
daughter’s life-stone.
Elder Sthetor meanwhile, keeping
in mind the harsh environment she had been imprisoned in, had secretly
anticipated, moreover delighted, in the probability of her early demise. But
the rare Phoenix chromosome had enabled Tekubzan to survive her terrible ordeal
and exacting circumstance, to eventually reach maturity. It had been the innate
advantage, for her surviving in those frigid temperatures of the cave during
her captivity all those years. Fluke of fate, she was destined to meet and fall
in love with Chandor.
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On typically ordinary late night,
warned of her death by the Life-stone, Aegeus and Olavigemar had rushed over at
once to investigate and discovered, to their great dismay, the breach, and the resulting
clear devastation at that part of the Cave.
Olavigemar had evoked the spell,
so did Aegeus, to discover the truth about what had transpired there. Both
Elders had picked up Chandor’s and Tekubzan’s residues, but even then, they had
failed to unlock the mystery of what sort of calamity had occurred there; and
more importantly, who the evil perpetrator had been, that so brazenly violated
at least two of their sacred laws.
Additionally, both had understood,
that an unknown incantation, far more powerful spell, had been cast to hide the
truth from both Elders of Karn. But the cave had disclosed five or six clues
nevertheless, that there had been number of happy events there, that must have
culminated in two young immortals eventually falling in love and becoming a
couple.
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| 04- CHANDOR AND TEKUBZAN |
Aegeus had never cogitated the possibility of a union between (two varied species) a Karn and a Kongrus; he was shocked, as everyone else, when the secret liaison between the condemned Tekubzan and Chandor became known. The esteemed elders, Aegeus and Olavigemar moreover, secretly been elated and amazed, at the discovery of traces that revealed the existence of an offspring grandchildren, more specifically twins, born to the loving couple.
The spotted (noted, discerned)
indicators had revealed next, of a violent intrusion and the subsequent dire
(catastrophic) struggle, obviously, between Tekubzan and the evil perpetrator.
In the end she had perished in the
fire, as her charred remains had been found in a heap. The offender, after the
evil deed, had unfortunately, clear gotten away, as there had been no residue
or remains of him, left behind.
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| 05- THE RESIDUE IN CAVE |
Fortunately, Tekubzan had
successfully hidden her newborn twins well before her devastating engagement
(fight, struggle) with the indomitable foe, for the infants (boy and girl) whom
she had named Zonar and Arnora, had remained unharmed through it all. She had
achieved this, by transferring a great deal of her powers to the babies, at the
time of the twins’ birth; this unfortunately had left her vulnerable, and far
less able to thwart (offset, counter) the perpetrator’s assaults.
It took no great imagination to
envision Chandor’s frustration, his ire (rage, fury), self-blame, then
ultimately, his inconsolable grief, to have arrived there too late and well
after the devastating fight. Intrepid Tekubzan, anticipating his return had
nevertheless managed to leave a message for him, therefore, following her
(telepathic) instructions, he had discovered the unharmed, hidden twins, his
son Zonar and daughter Arnora. Then, according to her wishes, for the evil
perpetrator had been bent on destroying their precious offsprings, Chandor had
absconded the mountain along with the twins, to permanently disappear (take
refuge) somewhere in the vast mortal world of Humans.
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| 06- CHANDOR DISSAPEARS IN THE MORTAL WORLD |
Aegeus from the start had innately mistrusted Sthetor; but he had all the same, still passively stood by and let Sthetor with dogged determination, rallying support from the
Elders of Karn and utilizing their
ancient laws, to set forth and to destroy Chandor (Zandar Kuntzu). At the time,
Aegeus had deeply resented being put in such a predicament and blamed his
renegade son Chandor (Zandar), for not being capable enough to triumph against
all odds.
Even though this great mystery
about the identity of the evil perpetrator had never been satisfactorily
resolved, Aegeus had his own suppositions, which in absence of solid proof, to
date he had kept to himself. He reflected on the fact that, Stheltor at that
time, on the pretext of having fallen gravely ill, had timely (absconded) gone
on a surreptitious retreat to supposedly convalesce, well before the detection
of Chandor’s absence, and the finding of Tekubzan’s breached prison. On his
return, he had taken to always wearing gloves. The reasons for this
idiosyncrasy had been successfully explained to all, except for Aegeus. Additionally,
Sthetor, had been the one strong component, behind the dogged persecution, the
hunting and eventual capture of Chandor. Back then, Aegeus had assumed,
vindictive Sthetor had intensely (dourly) hated Chandor for attaining the love
of Tekubzan, whom Sthetor coveted since her age (earth years) four and,
regarded (pegged) her as his owed prize. She had been the configured, essential
part of his high ambition (and sinister reasons), which he had hid behind a
noble claim, of wanting to perpetuate Kongrul Race, within Karn. That was why
venerable Olavigemar, from then on, had remained on his guard. In the end
Sthetor had still got her, and then, exacted his ultimate revenge on Chandor.
In hindsight, Aegeus anticipated
that there had been a far sinister reason behind it all; unfortunately, to present,
he had failed to resolve this enigmatic quandary (perplexing dilemma).
But Sthetor was now (single
mindedly) targeting to destroy his grandson Zonar. Aegeus, despite his seeming
indifference, was nevertheless caught in a bind. He knew all fate can be
altered; he just had not conceived yet, how to achieve alternate means. His
granddaughter Arnora was already lost to him; part of him secretly wanted to
preserve Zonar’s life as he saw enormous potential in his grandson.
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| 07- ZONAR - IMMORTAL (42)JP |
On the other hand, at present, Zonar posed the greatest threat to Karn Race’s welfare and lasting existence; for along with the prophesy, Zonar, was the possessor of the combination of both dragon and, albeit dormant, rare, mutated phoenix- YBXchromosome (DNA, genes). As the preservation, (safeguarding) of Karn Race had always been the paramount, (predominant) importance over everything in Aegeous’s life, he therefore anew, hardened his heart.
And so, Aegeus after his brief
ponder, simply nodded, dispassionately acquiescing to Sthetor’s current,
principal request; then, at the apt moment, he also gave Sthetor permission to
enlighten the others, but only on the scant (limited), pertinent details.
Sthetor’s mind subsequently open
to all, he checked his glee, and then looked about him for a spell, his
inexpressive, (emotionless) soulless grey eyes sweeping the rapt faces.
“Indeed,
it was a Divine Providence that interceded in sparing and extending Zonar's
life, so that he may play a vital (most fundamental) role in determining the
course of, mortal world's history.”
“Are
we to do nothing, then?” All eyes asked.
“No,
that's not what I meant at all.” Sthetor continued evenly, mutely. “Zonar should be apprehended at the
appropriate time and accordingly dealt with; to do otherwise, would be
irresponsible. But beware; it shall be a much harder task to accomplish, than
we had originally anticipated. I would have thought it inconceivable but here
we stand. There is no denying the fact that the renegade Immortal Chandor or
Zandar Kuntzu, had somehow acquired the most ancient, taboo spell and innately
passed it solely onto his progeny (offspring) Zonar;
and he, in well enough time, must have learned to safely utilize it.”
“The
proof lies before us. As things now stand, Zonar Kuntzu is far more resourceful
than we originally anticipated. He is now a force to be reckoned with.
Furthermore, if he knows this spell, which is a mere derivative, he must also
be acquainted with the prohibited primordial Kekok Enchantment.”
“What!” There was a quick
exchange of looks and baffled thoughts. “But
we have never heard of any Kekok Enchantment.”
“Of
course, not… The very notion of its existence has been forbidden knowledge long
ago. Believe me; you are all better off for not knowing it. It is the most
dangerous; most volatile spell there is for, once evoked, there is no certainty
of the results. In as much as it can grant you what you want, it can also,
quite unpredictably and with one stroke, negate (undo, cancel out) the very
Universe itself. All reality as we know it could cease to exist.”
“Zonar
was by far the most fortunate being in that it worked exactly the way he wanted
it to, with no serious (consequences) repercussions.”
All this while Elder Aegeus, with his head
down had remained in pensive silence; now suddenly terminating (breaking off)
his pondering, he looked straight at Dwengzur. A dour voice loudly intoned in Dwengzu’s head:
“There is no getting around it. You must
be armed with the same knowledge, rather, be imparted (bestowed) a superior
edification, if you are to succeed. Even then it may not be sure guarantee,
judging by the …. Hmm…But before you respond, stand warned that there is a dire
cost for this information, a sure consequence, most grievous and unalterable
one. Furthermore, once you have assimilated the Kekok Enchantment along with
the rest of Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek’s acumen and expertise, you may no longer be allowed to associate as
before with others of the Karn. You will be given only one chance, one chance
only, to accomplish your mission and, upon your return you will again meet with
the Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek. At that precise moment of your meeting
you will become the new Ultimate Supreme Elder and be given a new name; the
previous Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek, will then be relieved of any and all
obligation to race of Karn; he will of course ascend (rise) to the higher
realm, transforming into pure energy and, as an iridescent light, roam or be
part of the Cosmic Universe.”
All faces regarded Dwengzur now
with another strange, mixed emotion, blending of envy and abject pity, which
had intrusively and suddenly resurged. As it was, they understood fully how,
Zonar Kuntzu had the sure advantage over Dwengzur, to warrant such measure.
Zonar endowed with unusual and not yet fully comprehended powers, would be able
to coexist indefinitely (hundreds, if not thousands of years) with the
creatures at the outside world. It was also clear to all that unlike Zonar,
Dwengzur’s time at the outside world, after he had assimilated the Kekok
Enchantment, would be provisional; he only had comparatively (limited,) shorter
span, with which to fulfill his mission and return before his innate powers
indubitably were sapped. If he failed, as consequence, he would then either
became a mortal being with no memory of past or, if he were lucky, it brought
about his immediate and dreadful end, which meant that he would simply cease to
exist, no residue energy, no light, nothing.
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“Even so, I am resolute!” Dwengzur
vociferously declared.
Elder Aegeus with an unreadable
expression simply stared at Dwengzur for a long time.
“Very
well then, after you take a moment or two, to bid your farewells, you may then
follow me to the interior to receive the highly classified instructions from
Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek, for only he can impart to you the knowledge
you will require.”
The Elder Aegeus rose slowly from
his seat and now waited until Dwengzur made his brief and unemotional farewells
to those present then came to stand beside him. When Dwengzur was in position,
Elder Aegeus mumbled the secret incantation. Instantly he and Dwengzur, were
both reduced to two glowing, flickering balls of light that shot through the
air towards the far cavern wall and passing through it, promptly disappeared.
(END OF SECTION 20)
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