LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC – THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL – SECTION 11
Back at the Under-Secretary Lenny Sukzor’s private residence,
for a long while sleep had averted the intrepid Minister; lying awake in deep
contemplation, Lenny’s stare had been for some time now affixed (glued, set) on
the canopy of his four-poster bed. Incessantly his eyes (pupils) traced each
cleverly executed embroidery, woven so colorfully yet mockingly beautiful,
depicting patterns of marital fidelity and family’ loyalty, that of which now
taunted him with their lies.
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| 01- -LENNY SUKZOR (12)JP |
Their creator, his wife Juyin, was as beautiful as she was talented and, if the truth were to be known, he had loved her deeply from the first moment he had set eyes on her. Despite his present denial, despite all that had since come between them he was still enamored of her. He still treasured every moment they spent together and warmed in the ecstasy, the pure, unadulterated joy she infused down into the very cockles of his heart.
On this night of all nights, he longed to embrace her, to
pretend that all was simple and good between them, but his adored wife was not
where he desired her to be. She was not in bed beside him. The moment he had
feigned sleep, Juyin had snuck away.
Extending his hand, he felt the residual warmth of the mattress. His
brows knitted as he turned to his side and (smelled) smelt her perfume still
lingering on the pillows and sheets.
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| 02-JUYIN SUKZOR (1).pngJP |
He had known of her recruitment from the very start. Until this major incursion he had boasted with impunity how he had kept his household clear of spies but on that day when he had received certain confirmation his anger had welled up intolerably in his chest. He had conjured up thousands of tortures to pay her back for this ultimate betrayal.
It mattered little that she had most certainly been (coerced)
forced into carrying out her actions, if she had been truly loyal, she would
have taken her own life rather than submit to the course that was imposed on
her. He had even considered disposing of
this viper nestled in his bosom, by administering a slow-acting poison that
mimicked “Breakbone Fever”, killing her with long, lingering, excruciating
pain. Then the anger and disappointment
had subsided to rest deep within his marrow, and he’d reasoned in a cool,
dispassionate way that, he was being too idealistic, and, even if he’d disposed
of her, another would be planted in her stead, one who might be far harder to
detect.
Subsequently, with things seemingly remaining as they were, Juyin
was only given to convey the certain information that Lenny wished for Zakhertan
Yozdek to know.
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| 03- JUYIN SUKZOR (6)JP |
Even with the apparent benefits of having this direct link (contact) to the Sovereign, he had to argue his case long and hard before Egil Viggoaries and, had endured the lasting humiliation of being verbally, virtually cuckolded in front of his brothers and peers, in order to merely win the continuance of her life for just a while longer before her eventual and certain, sentence to a painful and ignominious death (demise). For nothing less, would satisfy Egil Viggories. The Dark Eunuch Egil, his superior, had so many varied ways to inflict pain and humiliation on a being, and after filling Lenny’s ear with it, each time Lenny had felt wronged by her, like tonight, overriding his mixed emotions, his imagination simply ran rampant with the many possibilities of her imminent, dire punishments.
“Oh, what is the use of tormenting my-self? That day will come soon enough!” Lenny
Sukzor quickly shunted these thoughts aside.
“Better to think of something more to the point,
like Dwengzur, for instance. Where has he gotten himself to?” Inwardly Lenny Sukzor reviewed the same,
haunting questions. He had asked discreetly about but none knew of the
Immortal's whereabouts since the last assassination attempt on His Royal
Highness Zakhertan Yozdek. It was as though Dwengzur had vanished into thin
air. The wizard's disappearance without a trace, though not out of character,
the long duration (timespan) of it, had baffled everyone. Of course, the usual rumors circulated, some
even reaching the status of a plausible hypothesis, but Lenny had not given any
of them much credence.
“Or maybe
he’d returned to whence he came...Korion.” Lenny Sukzor, at present,
speculated. He had his certain
reservations about Dwengzur from the very start, yet that night, he had been
constrained by Egil Viggoaries's bidding to allow Dwengzur to penetrate his
deepest most innermost thoughts, in the demonstration.
“If he had retrieved my most confidential stance
(position, perspective) he had not let on, had not disclosed the one most
damaging fact that would have spelled my immediate doom. Moreover, he could have extorted me, to
secure his silence.” Lenny, thinking back, now pondered on the concern
once more.
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| 04- DWENGZUR (AS lENNY REMEMBERS) |
Lenny also recalled the fleeting, knowing smile and the Immortal’s perfunctory reaction had been, when the opportunity had finally availed itself for Lenny, to broach this most delicate subject in privacy with him. Dwengzur had curtly declared that he was not at all interested in the politics of Wenjenkun, or of Korion for that matter. His manner, at the time, had indicated that he had a far greater purpose in mind. Of course, that purpose had since become clear, after the last assassination attempt on Sovereign Zakhertan Yozdek.
Dwengzur had
established himself at Court solely to apprehend one of his own!
“Perhaps the hoary legends of this red-haired race
were true after all?” Lenny
nodded absently.
Just then Lenny Sukzor was startled from his reverie by the
faint sounds of footpads in the hall.
The door handle slid against the latch.
He lay perfectly still in mimed slumber as she crept inside, quickly
disrobed and slipped between the covers. She sniffed. “Was she crying?”
Lenny longed to turn to her, clasp her to his heart and tell
her that it was all right, that come what may, he would protect her in the end,
but he knew that it would be a veil of lies that would only soothe his
conscience temporarily. He lay like a
stone statue, cold and unmoving as her warm body snuggled next to his and she
buried her head under the covers.
“Blessed sleep will overtake you soon, my love,
and then you will find the solace you seek.
Or will you? Will the nightmare of your betrayal haunt your peace even
then?” Lenny Sukzor cursed
himself, cursed his ambition, and cursed the times and everything else that
kept him apart from his heart's desire (urgings). Soon, out of sheer emotional
exhaustion he, too, was impervious (unreceptive, as he was asleep) to the
stirrings of the night.
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In the dead of night an unusual thud had abruptly and with a
start awakened Nevetsecnuac; but now all seemed deathly still in semi-darkness.
Just then however, his ears detected (picked up) another slight thump. There it was again. This was followed by
a faint rustling of leaves and then a crunching sound.
This very night being exceptionally hot and humid, to gain
some relief Nevetsecnuac had left the windows wide open; a slight breeze moved
the curtains aside at that point in time to expose the culprit crouched in a
corner of the windowsill, but he scurried off, frightened by the minute
disturbance in the room. A fleeting
smile brushed Nevetsecnuac’s lips as he rubbed his eyes and then languidly
(indolently) surveyed the room. Why had he slept so long? He had only meant
to doze off for a few minutes, just long enough to fool that busybody steward!
He reached for the empty cup by his bedside and examined it.
His nose creased having at once picked up the faint but distinct odor that
anyone else might have easily missed.
Earlier on, alerted by the steward's uncharacteristic insistence, he had
had only a sip before slyly giving most of it to the resident cat that, of
late, had taken to sleeping in Nevetsecnuac's room.
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| 05- SLEEPING CAT |
The feline was now sprawled at the foot of the bed, (out cold) dead to the world. Nevetsecnuac’s keen ears at that moment having picked up yet another suspicious sound, this time from the hallway, Nevetsecnuac swiftly shoved the drugged feline under the bed where she could recover from her misfortune without alerting the staff to her state.
Nevetsecnuac then returned to bed and slipped under the covers
to feign sleep just in time, when suddenly, the door creaked open, and someone
tiptoed into the room. Nevetsecnuac
distinctly (became aware) felt, the change in airflow as the bedcurtains were
parted and then the hot breath of someone bending over him as if to assure
himself that Fradel Rurik Korvald was, as he should be, in deepest slumber.
Once this had been ascertained the intruder walked over and shut the window,
locked it, and pulled those curtains tightly together; he next reached over to
the night table and picked up the incriminating cup. Afterwards, just as silently he exited the
room and closed the door behind him.
"Go to bed." Nevetsecnuac heard the hushed command
at outside. "There's nothing more
to be done here. He will be sound asleep until the morning." The sounds of their reassured footfalls
gradually muted down the length of the hallway.
The evidence now gone, Nevetsecnuac bit put out, bolted
upright in sitting position in bed.
What warranted this precaution?
He had been intentionally, for an
unknown reason, drugged to be rendered incapacitated. If it had been a foe, he
would have certainly used this opportunity to finish him off. His suspicions all the same aroused,
Nevetsecnuac pushed the covers aside and quietly got out of the bed; after he
changed into dark garments he walked over and pressed his ear to the door.
“Good!” Nevetsecnuac exhaled deeply,
knowing full well the sentry and the night attendants had all left; not a soul
stirred at the hallway’s extended (comprehensive) perimeter, therefore, it was
now perfectly safe for him to exit the room and (scout) reconnoitre the
grounds. Having already conceived the notion, just what and where the main
action- the covert meeting might transpire, Nevetsecnuac once at the outside,
advanced stealthily and vigilantly through the pathways, for under the canopy
of winking stars and the full moon’s silver rays the checkered grounds were
perfectly (completely)illuminated.
Nevetsecnuac persistently
then stuck to the right, his silent steps traversing (going forward) without
hesitation on the snaking flagstone trails that would eventually around the
bend, disappear behind the manufactured mountain.
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| 06- GROUNDS AT NIGHT |
He crossed several small walking bridges that hopped over bubbling brooks and streams of diverse sizes and depths, taking care all the while to be swallowed up by the shadows to avoid detection by the increased number of security patrols that were out and about this very night, dutifully scouring that segment of the complex.
At one point, Nevetsecnuac had been constrained to wait in
concealment as two groups of guards met midpoint and shared some bits of idle
gossip before resuming their rounds. Soon as the coast was clear, Nevetsecnuac
quickly skirted the heart shaped pool filled with golden carp sparkling in the
moonlit water and delved into a thick pine grove to avoid the next cordon
(barrier, blockade) of guards. Following the thin meandering gravel path, he
quickly emerged at its far side in the forbidden section and headed straight
towards the location of Zaur's secret office.
Surprisingly however, the wing was just as dark and perfectly
quiet. Nevetsecnuac climbed up the unusually tall trellis, covered with lush
green vines (decked bluebell flowers), which was on the shaded side of the
building, to reach the apex of the roof and then to survey the grounds from
there. Just as he was about to reach the
peak (top), he noticed some ways off down below, a faint, quivering sliver of
light blinking behind the iron shutters of an oblong window tucked under the
eaves of a solid structure (building), nestled in the thick bamboo grove, in
the most ancient part of the mansion.
His senses on the alert Nevetsecnuac crept stealthily towards
it, as his determination to unravel this newest duplicity of Zaur's, wounded
itself tighter and tighter into his will. Once there and perched under the
eaves like a bat, he peered through the narrow slit that was his only view into
the room and, strained his ears to make out what was being said. Despite the
deceptively small proportions of the structure on the outside, the hall within
was in fact spacious and, elongated away from his viewpoint, it comfortably
(assembled) accommodated some twenty or
thirty stout (robust, sturdy) cloaked men.
Nevetsecnuac quickly comprehended from their various accents
that these were the sectional leaders, congregated here from the various,
far-flung reaches of Wenjenkun. He had
to marvel at the apparent scope (extent, reach) of this secret organization and
the strict discipline to which masked members unquestioningly adhered. With keen interest he observed how they all
moved as if one body to reverently face the alter and, as Zaur Stugr stood off
to one side, swore the ancient oath of allegiance as if with one multi-toned
voice, renewing their bond to the Brotherhood.
The ceremony ended in a bloody ritual sacrifice after which
the cloaked figures, in a steady stream in which their positions were obviously
dictated by differences in rank or seniority, exited the hall through a hidden
tunnel.
(END OF SECTION 11)
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