LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC -THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL - SECTION 20
Only a handful of Elders of Karn and His Eminence Olavingemar had been privy to Aegeus’s secret, that Chandor (Zandar Kuntzu) and his offspring (twin son) Zonar, were both related to Aegeus by blood, and now it seemed, through his carelessness, the secret had been revealed to ambitious Sthetor as well. Aegeus put this concern aside and directed his attention instead, on the matter at hand.
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| 01- AEGEUS (1)B JP |
What made Zonar even more hazardous, was the fact that his blood also carried the mixed gene (although it was dormant) from his Immortal mother Tekubzan. She, the only daughter of His Eminence Olavingemar, had the rare phoenix chromosome, which had, once in every aeon, passed down to female genera of Kongrul. The rare Phoenix genetic material (chromosome, DNA) once manifested at maturity, from then on would enable the immortal female to transform, at will, into a phoenix or into a phoenix/human hybrid. Such a being also, via the blue flames, would possess immense regenerative healing powers. They could utilize their power to heal or harm anyone, even Immortals. Nevetsecnuac had also twins born to him, one being female, she could carry that gene.
The ancient race of Kongruls, despite the immeasurable
distance, once had a kinship (alliance, special link), with the race of Karn.
Unfortunately, the revered race of Kongruls were virtually annihilated during
the cataclysmic wars, save for the three (that Aegeus knew of): His Eminence
Olavingemar, his precious daughter Tekubzan, and of course,
Sthetor. All three-surviving
Kongruls, had been readily and without prejudice (generously) accepted into the
main fold of, Karn race. Moreover, in a noticeably abbreviated time, both,
benevolent Oavingemar and (problematic) Sthetor had achieved prominent
positions.
Notwithstanding their different prior status in Kongrul
Race, for Olavingemar had been a venerated, intellectual aristocrat whereas
Sthetor had been an ordinary, intransigent
(rigid, obdurate) warrior and a seir (diviner), the two had
outwardly been congenial
(affable) towards each other and, often cooperated on pressing matters.
But underneath it all, Aegeus had sensed (detected) the enduring (lifelong,
unwavering) hostility between Olavingemar and Sthetor. They were, moreover, as
different as day and night. This aggression had reached its zenith once, when
in a private meeting between the three honoured Elders of Karn, Aegeus,
Olavingemar and Sthetor, audacious Sthetor (who was Olavingemar’s age but
didn’t show it) had proposed to wed Tekubzan when she had reached the age of
maturity, to perpetuate their race. She was no more than (earth-years of) four
at the time.
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| 02-- STHETOR IMMORTAL (16)JP |
Olavingemar barely able to contain his ire (indignation, wrath), he had simply bolted from his seat and, without a word, left the meeting. Things were supposed to have been smoothed later, but Aegeus had remained doubtful of the validity of that claim. Furthermore, from then on Olavingemar had remained guarded against Sthetor. Aegeus, nevertheless, not wishing to pry (meddle), had not broached the subject with either of them.
Then hundred years later, at a
typical Divination Ceremony where, each new generation at the age of ten Earth
years was evaluated, His Eminence Olavingemar the Most Supreme Elder of Karn
Race, had read the ominous prediction that, the child Tekubzan was unfortunately,
the carrier of a seed that would be the harbinger of the Race of Karn’s utter
obliteration (eradication). To prevent this from ever happening, by a majority
vote, she was in a fortnight, condemned to death. His Eminence Olavigemar,
however, privately reconsulted the Heavens and given an option, an alternative
to the execution, she was instead, sentenced to a much crueler fate of being
imprisoned for life at a secret location, behind an impenetrable one piece of
solid rock, where which its thickness muted all sound, inside one of the
divisions (tunnels) of the deepest recesses of the Cave. There she was destined
to live, the rest of her long life, in solitary confinement and in pitch
darkness. Secrecy being paramount, Olavigemar and Aegeus had been the sole ones
to know the whereabouts of her prison. At least she would be alive. Elders of
Karn being habitually placid, they had all agreed to this, save for Sthetor.
Aegeus had seen his ugly side then, especially when latter’s arguments had been
superseded (overridden).
Understandably, Olavigemar from then on had never mentioned or reminisced
about his beloved daughter; and avoided, all communication (clairvoyantly)
telepathically or otherwise with her. But despite the great passage of time, he
had not, not once, forsaken Tekubzan.
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| 03-HIS EMINENCE OLAVINGEMAR (2)JP |
Aegeus knew, Olavigemar had kept her life-stone along with his, in a secret compartment, somewhere in his room. Life-stones had been an essential part of life in Kongrus. One year after birth, each Kongrus received a singular, unique small stone (the kind only found in Kongrus’s homeland, Tarkon), which, in a specific ceremony, on the second full moon of the year, their drop of blood was absorbed by the stone, turning it into luminescent celadon color. So long as it glowed celadon, the individual was believed to be still among the living. Since her imprisonment, Olavigemar each night before going to sleep, without fail, had checked his daughter’s life-stone. Elder Sthetor meanwhile, keeping in mind the harsh environment she had been imprisoned in, had secretly anticipated, and hoped, for her early demise. But the rare Phoenix chromosome, had enabled Tekubzan to survive her terrible ordeals and exacting circumstance, to reach maturity. It had been the innate advantage, for her surviving in those frigid temperatures of the cave during her captivity all those years. Fluke of fate, she was destined to meet and fall in love with Chandor.
Warned of her death by the
Life-stone, Aegeus and Olavigemar had rushed over to investigate and discovered
the breach and the clear devastation at that part of the Cave. Olavigemar had
evoked the spell, so did Aegeus, to discover the truth about what had
transpired there. Both Elders had picked up Chandor’s and Tekubzan’s residues,
but even then, they had failed to unlock the mystery of what sort of calamity
had occurred there; and more importantly, who the evil perpetrator had been,
that so brazenly violated at least two of their sacred laws.
An unknown incantation, far more
powerful spell, had been cast to hide the truth from both Elders of Karn. But
the cave had disclosed five or six clues nevertheless, that there had been
number of happy events there, that must have culminated in two young immortals
eventually falling in love and becoming a couple. The spotted (noted,
discerned) indicators had revealed next, of a violent intrusion and the
subsequent dire (catastrophic) struggle, obviously, between Tekubzan and the
evil perpetrator. In the end she had perished in the fire, as her charred
remains had been found in a heap. The offender, after the evil deed, had
unfortunately, clear gotten away, as there had been no residue or remains of
him, left behind.
Aegeus had never cogitated the
possibility of a union between (two varied species) a Karn and a Kongrus; he
was shocked, as everyone else, when the secret liaison between the condemned
Tekubzan and Chandor became known. The esteemed elders, Aegeus and Olavigemar
moreover, secretly been elated and amazed, at the discovery of traces that
revealed the existence of an offspring grandchildren, more specifically twins,
born to them both.
Fortunately, Tekubzan had
successfully hidden her newborn twins well before the devastating engagement
(fight, struggle), for the infants (boy and girl) whom she had named Zonar and
Arnora, had remained unharmed through it all. She had achieved this, by transferring
a great deal of her powers to the babies, at the time of the twins’ birth; this
unfortunately had left her vulnerable, and far less able to thwart (offset,
counter) the perpetrator’s assaults.
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| 04- CHANDOR-IMMORTAL (4)jp |
It took no great imagination to envision Chandor’s frustration, his ire (rage, fury), selfblame, then ultimately, his inconsolable grief, to have arrived there too late and well after it had been all over. Intrepid Tekubzan, anticipating his return had nevertheless managed to leave a message for him, therefore, following her (telepathic) instructions, he had discovered the unharmed, hidden twins, his son Zonar and daughter Arnora. Then, according to her wishes, for the evil perpetrator had been bent on destroying their offspring, Chandor had absconded the mountain along with the twins, to permanently disappear (take refuge) somewhere in the vast mortal world of Humans.
Even though this great mystery
about the identity of the evil perpetrator had never been satisfactorily
resolved, Aegeus had his own suppositions, which in absence of solid proof, to
date he had kept to himself.
Stheltor on the
pretext of having fallen gravely ill, timely, had gone on a surreptitious
retreat to convalesce, well before the detection of Chandor’s absence, and the
finding of Tekubzan’s breached prison. On his return, he had taken to always
wearing gloves. The reasons for this idiosyncrasy had been successfully
explained to all, except for Aegeus. Additionally, Sthetor, had been the one
strong component, behind the dogged persecution, the hunting and eventual capture
of Chandor. In hindsight Aegeus now assumed, vindictive Sthetor had intensely
(dourly) hated Chandor for attaining the love of Tekubzan, whom Sthetor coveted
since her age (earth years) four and, regarded (pegged) her as his owed prize.
She had been the configured, essential part of his high ambition
(and sinister reasons), which he
had hid behind a noble claim, of wanting to perpetuate Kongrul Race, within
Karn. That was why venerable Olavigemar, from then on, had remained on his
guard. In the end Sthetor had still got her, and then, exacted his ultimate
revenge on Chandor.
Aegeus from the start had innately mistrusted Sthetor; but
he had all the same, still passively stood by and let Sthetor with dogged
determination, rallying support from the
Elders of Karn and utilizing their
ancient laws, to set forth and to destroy Chandor (Zandar Kuntzu). At the time,
Aegeus had deeply resented being put in such a predicament and blamed his
renegade son Chandor (Zandar), for not being capable enough to triumph against
all odds. But Sthetor was now (single mindedly) targeting to destroy his
grandson Zonar. Aegeus, despite his seeming indifference, was nevertheless
caught in a bind. He knew all fate can be altered; he just had not conceived
yet, how to achieve alternate means. His granddaughter Arnora was already lost
to him; part of him secretly wanted to preserve Zonar’s innocent life as he saw
enormous potential in his grandson.
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| 05- ZONAR - IMMORTAL (42)JP |
On the other hand, at present, Zonar posed the greatest threat to Karn Race’s welfare and lasting existence; for along with the prophesy, Zonar, was the possessor of the combination of both dragon and, albeit dormant, rare, mutated phoenix- YBXchromosome (DNA, genes). As the preservation, (safeguarding) of Karn Race had always been the paramount, (predominant) importance over everything in Aegeous’s life, he anew hardened his heart.
And so, Aegeus after his brief
ponder, simply nodded, dispassionately acquiescing to Sthetor’s current,
principal request; then, at the proper moment, he also gave Sthetor permission
to enlighten the others, but only on the scant (limited), pertinent details.
Sthetor’s mind subsequently open
to all, he checked his glee, and then looked about him for a spell, his
inexpressive, (emotionless) soulless grey eyes sweeping the rapt faces.
“Indeed,
it was a Divine Providence that interceded in sparing and extending Zonar's
life, so that he may play a vital (most fundamental) role in determining the
course of, mortal world's history.”
“Are
we to do nothing, then?” All eyes asked.
“No,
that's not what I meant at all.” Sthetor continued evenly, mutely. “Zonar should be apprehended at the
appropriate time and accordingly dealt with; to do otherwise, would be
irresponsible. But beware; it shall be a much harder task to accomplish, than
we had originally anticipated. I would have thought it inconceivable but here
we stand. There is no denying the fact that the renegade Immortal Chandor or
Zandar Kuntzu, had somehow acquired the most ancient, taboo spell and innately
passed it solely onto his progeny (offspring) Zonar;
and he, in well enough time, must have learned to safely utilize it.”
“The
proof lies before us. As things now stand, Zonar Kuntzu is far more resourceful
than we originally anticipated. He is now a force to be reckoned with.
Furthermore, if he knows this spell, which is a mere derivative, he must also
be acquainted with the prohibited primordial Kekok Enchantment.”
“What!” There was a quick
exchange of looks and baffled thoughts. “But
we have never heard of any Kekok Enchantment.”
“Of
course, not… The very notion of its existence has been forbidden knowledge long
ago. Believe me; you are all better off for not knowing it. It is the most
dangerous; most volatile spell there is for, once evoked, there is no certainty
of the results. In as much as it can grant you what you want, it can also,
quite unpredictably and with one stroke, negate (undo, cancel out) the very
Universe itself. All reality as we know it could cease to exist.”
“Zonar
was by far the most fortunate being in that it worked exactly the way he wanted
it to, with no serious (consequences) repercussions.”
All this while Elder Aegeus, with his head
down had remained in pensive silence; now suddenly terminating (breaking off)
his pondering, he looked straight at Dwengzur. A dour voice loudly intoned in
Dwengzu’s head: “There is no getting
around it. You must be armed with the same knowledge, rather, be imparted
(bestowed) a superior edification, if you are to succeed. Even then it may not
be sure guarantee, judging by the …. Hmm…But before you respond, stand warned
that there is a dire cost for this information, a sure consequence, most
grievous and unalterable one. Furthermore, once you have assimilated the Kekok
Enchantment along with the rest of Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek’s acumen and expertise, you may no longer be
allowed to associate as before with others of the Karn. You will be given only
one chance, one chance only, to accomplish your mission and, upon your return
you will again meet with the Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek. At that precise
moment of your meeting you will become the new Ultimate Supreme Elder and be
given a new name; the previous Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek, will then be
relieved of any and all obligation to race of Karn; he will of course ascend
(rise) to the higher realm, transforming into pure energy and, as an iridescent
light, roam or be part of the Cosmic Universe.”
All faces regarded Dwengzur now
with another strange, mixed emotion, blending of envy and abject pity, which
had intrusively and suddenly resurged. As it was, they understood fully how,
Zonar Kuntzu had the sure advantage over Dwengzur, to warrant such measure.
Zonar endowed with unusual and not yet fully comprehended powers, would be able
to coexist indefinitely (hundreds, if not thousands of years) with the
creatures at the outside world. It was also clear to all that unlike Zonar,
Dwengzur’s time at the outside world, after he had assimilated the Kekok
Enchantment, would be provisional; he only had comparatively (limited,) shorter
span, with which to fulfill his mission and return before his innate powers
indubitably were sapped. If he failed, as consequence, he would then either
became a mortal being with no memory of past or, if he were lucky, it brought
about his immediate and dreadful end, which meant that he would simply cease to
exist, no residue energy, no light, nothing.
“Even so, I am resolute!” Dwengzur
vociferously declared.
Elder Aegeus with an unreadable
expression simply stared at Dwengzur for a long time.
“Very
well then, after you take a moment or two, to bid your farewells, you may then
follow me to the interior to receive the highly classified instructions from
Ultimate Supreme Elder Yokanotek, for only he can impart to you the knowledge
you will require.”
The Elder Aegeus rose slowly from
his seat and now waited until Dwengzur made his brief and unemotional farewells
to those present then came to stand beside him. When Dwengzur was in position,
Elder Aegeus mumbled the secret incantation. Instantly he and Dwengzur, were
both reduced to two glowing, flickering balls of light that shot through the
air towards the far cavern wall and passing through it, promptly disappeared.
(END OF SECTION 20)
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