LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 8
The ghosts stirred, and many took flights into the distance or into the air, as high as they were permitted to go. But before Nevetsecnuac could accost one of the fleeing ghosts the ground split open with a terrifying noise and a horde of horrendous trolls streamed out of the fiery crevice. Cracking their whips to disperse the unfortunate ghosts who failed to clear the way fast enough, the ugly trolls, cursing and spitting, carved out an open, direct path to Nevetsecnuac. In their wake there emerged from the chasm, where red hot flames now shot up on high, two most grotesque, most hideous Demon Guards, half human, half beast, with barbed tails between their legs, lolling tongues, jagged, razor-sharp talons, saw-like teeth and blazing, glittering eyes (orbs) set in leathery, blue faces framed by horns and frizzled, raven black hair.
Standing fifteen feet tall,
they were truly more fearsome, more gruesome, and more nightmarish than
anything Nevetsecnuac had ever seen or imagined.
The terrified ghosts,
clustered at a safe distance, sobbed loudly and cringed apprehensively, knowing
what awaited him.
Gnashing their rows of
teeth, hissing and spitting, the Demon Guards swaggered menacingly towards
Nevetsecnuac. One unlucky young ghost who
had failed to clear the way, paralyzed as he was in fear, drew the unwarranted attention
of the lead Demon; finding this ready gift irresistible, he halted his advance long
enough to reach out with his razor-sharp talons towards the unfortunate spirit.
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01- YOUNG GHOST PARALYZED WITH FEAR |
Demon’s talons subsequently entered the ghost’s chest cavity and ripped out the prized delicacy, the heart, which he ate in one gulp then licked his chops. Both demon guards next were about to tear into the remaining flesh to consume the lungs and liver, when Nevetsecnuac, outraged, shouted at them (Demon Guards) in indignation, drawing their attention to him, hoping to spare the poor victim from further torment (anguish).
The other spirits, knowing
what they knew, had recoiled in terror, while the braver ones with their hearts
palpitating, eventually finding their voices, despite their shuddering, whimpered
thoughtful warnings to Nevetsecnuac, but it was too late.
One of the Demons, pinning
his fiery gaze on Nevetsecnuac, shot two iridescent red beams from his pupils
and paralyzed Nevetsecnuac where he stood; it was implicit (understood) that his
turn would come soon enough. Rendered helpless and unable to close his eyelids,
meanwhile, Nevetsecnuac witnessed the unfortunate ghost being torn limb from
limb then devoured ravenously by the two Demons. The trolls standing by, looked on hungrily but
not daring to intercede and claim even a miniscule share, hoped instead for a (forgotten)
scant morsel to be left behind. However,
to their disappointment, the two demons even fought over the entrails, and then
settled leisurely to crunch the bones until nothing at all was left of the poor
ghost. Then, belching jarringly
(dissonantly), the Demon Guards rancorously advanced upon Nevetsecnuac.
"You're to come with
us. You have a lot to answer for."
The leader growled then, with one of his talons (like a hook) piercing the top
of Nevetsecnuac's skull, he led the way as he dragged Nevetsecnuac down into
the hellish fires. The agonizing pain
Nevetsecnuac suffered as he was hauled away was so intense that he fought to
maintain his consciousness (awareness, cognizance).
Down in the depths of the netherworld
(Hell), in that surreal topography (landscape) the glowing fires raged
everywhere.
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02 -NETHERWORLD |
The stony, wabbly path they were on led across a bridge which was flanked on both sides by an abysmal plummet, that intermittently cocooned chambers of horror from which emanated ghastly, heart-rending screams and wails.
Nevetsecnuac was thankful he could not see the
imagined atrocities; nevertheless, their anguished cries grated on his ears as
the stench of burning flesh assailed his nose. Subsequently, these unfortunate
ghosts, rather what remained of them, were thence (thereafter) ravenously devoured
by the rowdy groups of demons seated at long tables. An adjacent chamber
revealed a still more ghastly, terrifying sight; there a giant beastly head,
its huge mouth filled with row upon row of molars, was being fed human souls by
other Demon Guards. The beast with no
body was grinding up the unfortunate souls between his teeth like a millstone.
Nevetsecnuac flanked by the two Demons,
enduring (experiencing) violent vertigo, was dragged across a suspended tall
bridge, constructed over a fast-flowing river of blood. Dark crimson and foamy
swirling whirlpools periodically revealed giant vipers that were devouring the
cart loads of ghosts (ones who’d ended their life prematurely via suicide,) now
being steadily dumped into the flow from the banks. In their frenzy feeding these snakes churned
the water so high that the bridge overhead perpetually (swayed) shook
unsteadily.
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03- SNAKES FEEDING |
The piranha infested bluish ponds came into view next; here the waters boiled as the swarms of flesh-eating fish in their feeding frenzy instantly stripped off all there was of those guilty of gluttony, avarice, spite and malevolence. Unceremoniously dumped into the churning, lighting-streaked waters, where all flesh disappeared right away down to the skeletal bones.
More horrific still was
the Hill of Blades beside it, penalty reserved for the worst of humanity,
including mass murderers. Their minced (diced)
pieces of flesh were quickly picked clean by the scavenging vultures that
hovered noisily overhead.
Eventually Nevetsecnuac
and his captors passed through a pair of pronged bronze gates guarded by two
fearsome Bull Demons and entered a dark, elongated hall dotted with part-beast,
part human, demons, resembling tigers, wolves and hyenas lying or sitting,
panting, their tongues lolling, licking their chops. The high walls, even the ceiling were made
entirely of human skulls and bones crawling with flies, maggots, and
worms. The floors beneath Nevetsecnuac’s
hauled (lugged, dragged) feet were all paved with crushed bones.
They approached a second
set of doors, guarded by fearsome, grotesque giant Demons with halberds. The bronze framed, purple ingrained cinnabar
doors opened with a creaking, grinding sound onto a large vermilion hall, at
the head of which was, seated on a dais and leaning against a desk, passing
judgment, the most monstrous, most hideous looking Underworld King, Dekiletgan.
On either side of
Dekiletgan, the half-human, half-beast fearsome demons holding standards on
two-pronged spears were drawn up in tight, impenetrable ranks. Standing in attendance off to the left side,
holding stacks of files, was a tiger-headed Official. Next to him stood the
hunchbacked, fox-headed, human-bodied clerk who, before the handling of each
case, perused it carefully then passed the appropriate dossier to his superior.
As Nevetsecnuac's turn
came the Demon Guards released Nevetsecnuac from the spell of immobility,
prodded him forwards and forced him to his knees, after which they bowed and
respectfully stepped aside.
The Demon King Dekiletgan,
fixing his hard gaze on Nevetsecnuac, ordered the prisoner to approach the
bench and state his plea, part of the empty, meaningless formality.
Nevetsecnuac, nevertheless,
respectfully prostrated (bowed-down) low
and stated briefly his grievance; after which, he eloquently implored His Honor
to grant him a second chance so as to fulfill his destiny and avenge all those
that had been wronged, adding quickly that his own fate mattered little to him
and, once his task was complete, he'd most willingly, without a qualm, would succumb
to extreme tortures of Hell until his penance was paid in full.
Nevetsecnuac's courage and
loyalty impressed Dekiletgan. Favorably
disposed to granting him temporary amnesty, the fiendish King turned his
attention to Nevetsecnuac's dossier before him and opened it. However, he had read only a few lines when he
exploded in a sudden, great, all-consuming rage. Smoke emanated from his nostrils; fire
flashed from his pupils. "What
blunder is this?" he thundered. Checking his anger summarily however, but
glaring at the tiger-headed Official, he summoned with a wave of his hand both
the tiger-headed Official and the fox-headed clerk to approach the bench. After being questioned at length, both were
exonerated from all blame.
The Demon King Dekiletgan
(pinned, turned) reverted his fiery, blazing eyes next to Nevetsecnuac.
"Because of your
stupid blunder," he fumed, "all my records are now botched up! You are guilty of the most heinous crime and
deserve the extreme penalty of this court!
Even after the term of your penance, there will be no appeal, no
reprieve for the likes of you."
Then, hastening the
procedure, Dekiletgan passed the severest sentence upon poor Nevetsecnuac, at
the end of which Nevetsecnuac was condemned to becoming a non-entity for
eternity.
"Take him away!" commanded the
Dekiletgan as his final order.
"No, I refuse to
abide by this hasty, unfair verdict, this travesty of justice!"
Nevetsecnuac protested indignantly.
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04-NEVETS ARGUES HIS CASE BEFORE THE UNDERWORLD KING DEKILETGAN |
"You call this a just ruling? Where is my purported day in court? I demand I be given a chance to vindicate myself! What kind of court is this that tramples on truth, integrity, justice, and probity? I will not deny that of which I stand guilty. Even then, there were extenuating circumstances and legitimate, valid reasons for my actions. No, I'm not seeking a total, or even a partial acquittal. My singular wish is to gain a chance to fulfill my obligation. No! I will not be silenced, not until I get what I want!" Nevetsecnuac stomped his foot defiantly.
"I demand to be
heard! Let go of me, you beasts!" As Nevetsecnuac struggled and fought hard to
free himself from the ever tightening, constricting bonds that had magically
appeared on him and, trussed as he was, ducked, bent, and swerved to escape the
full impact of the needling, piercing talons, sharp claws and silver rods that
mercilessly targeted his head and body from all directions. "Nooo... “
"Hah?" just then
he came to with a start.
"Where am I? How did I get here?" Nevetsecnuac asked
out loud, looking-about him wildly. To
his great relief he found himself to be no longer in Hell but on Earth. He was amid a thorny bush with clinging
runners tightly wound around his legs and waist, restricting his
movements. He was soaked to the skin
from the pounding rain.
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05- NEVETS IN THE RAIN (23) |
He looked down and saw his feet totally submerged in a pool of water up to his knees; meanwhile, he could sense many bloodsuckers, having found their way under cloth (his trousers), gorging on his blood. Disconcerted by this; however, "Zonar?" Instead, his hand reached up and felt his throat that was still throbbing in excruciating pain right where he had imagined, or dreamt, that Zonar had inflicted that deep gash. His mind still clouded with incomprehensible jargon, he saw wild, strange, bizarre visions flashing intermittently, dancing before his eyes.
"How on earth did I
get here?" Once more he raised the question in exasperation as he jogged
his memory and tried his best to recollect the very last thing that he did or
had happened to him. Meanwhile, with
slight difficulty, he succeeded in weaving his way out from the grasp of the
thorny bushes and, by pulling, tearing at the adhesive, sticky tentacles and
runners that stubbornly clung to his hair, skin, and clothes, he eventually
freed himself. With bewildered eyes
Nevetsecnuac then scanned the surroundings in search of his horse, but he had
wandered into a no-man's land and here the dense forest permitted only scant
light as thick, lush, tall vegetation choked the ground, obscuring whatever lay
in its bosom.
His only chance, he knew,
was to get to a higher ground and survey the wider perimeter.
Traversing the ascending,
snaking path recently carved, obviously by him, Nevetsecnuac emerged finally
out of this nightmarish gorge.
Using a small dagger, he
kept concealed (in his boot) for eating purposes, he carefully scraped the
bothersome bloodsuckers off his skin.
When the tapering rain
just then ceased and strong winds, sweeping the clouds away to the west,
created a window in the sky for the sun to peep from, Nevetsecnuac concluded
from its position that it was late afternoon, which meant that three-quarters
of the day had been, prior, lost to him in a shroud of mystery. Fortunately, at present, his mind had
cleared, and his senses were fully restored to normal.
Seated comfortably on a
boulder, he tried to recollect the very last thing he had done, which, in all
probability, had contributed to his hallucination. It quickly came to him: “Yes, just before dawn he had dug up some
edible roots for sustenance.”
“Could it be
that particular? No!” He shook his
head in disbelief. He was certain that
he had made no mistake on that account.
He had eaten that root hundreds of times with no consequence. In the end, however, he had to concede that,
perhaps in this part of the country, the same variety had evolved, triggering
hence, detrimental effects on humans.
“In that case,” he inwardly noted, “I had best avoid that particular root altogether.”
This was most
disconcerting because, having come this far, he could not now jeopardize his
aim.
Reflecting on his vivid
hallucination, his combat with Zonar, his wretched, frustrating experience in
Hell, Nevetsecnuac nodded with a wry smile, “It
seems there is some measure of truth in these mountain folk tales and
superstitions, after all. Fortunately,
I’ve survived it unscathed, but what of my mare? I must seek her out right away; she could not
have wandered too far unless she's fallen prey to some predatory beast!”
Fortunately, he'd taken
the precaution of keeping the identity papers and summons on him. Still, without a horse and a scholar's formal
attire, Nevetsecnuac knew he could not advance in speed, to meet the deadline,
nor could he present himself on foot in the Capital as Fradel Rurik Korvald,
without arousing some unwarranted suspicion and dubious curiosity that might
jeopardize his enterprise.
As he searched for his
horse, there was yet another nagging concern in the back of his mind. “In a
perilous duel he had clashed swords and fists with Zonar, with neither of them
gaining the advantage or besting the other.
Up until now, he had thought they were equally matched, but did this
bizarre hallucination in some way portend a future encounter with, perhaps,
graver consequences for him (Nevetsecnuac)?
Was his delirium a premonition, a warning not to engage Zonar? Yet, what if Zonar was already in Channing
(Imperial Capital City of Wenjenjun) to carry out precisely the purpose he had
claimed in the illusion?”
“No,” shaking his head, Nevetsecnuac dispelled that
preposterous notion. Zonar was too
honorable for that.
Deciding to reconnoiter
more extensively and, to get an aerial/panoramic view, Nevetsecnuac quickly
climbed the tallest ancient tree. As his
eyes scanned the distance far and wide, to his elation he suddenly spotted, a
lone horse resembling his, which had just moved out from under the broad-leafed
canopy to graze beside a creek which snaked through a clearing beyond the next
hill.
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06- HORSE |
"Excellent!" Nevetsecnuac exclaimed
in satisfaction. Then his eyes sought
the path which he had inadvertently strayed from. Finding it, he traced it to where it met up
with the old main road, barely visible from his position. Having set firmly (etched) the direction and
all pertinent obstacles in his memory, Nevetsecnuac climbed back down from the
dizzying crown of this ancient tree with the nimble agility of a monkey. After
which he hastened as fast as his legs could carry him, traversing the rough terrain,
to reach his mount before dusk. The
spooked steed, none the worse for wear, bolted at the first sight of
Nevetsecnuac then neighed and trotted warily, but did not run away.
Approaching her
cautiously, Nevetsecnuac took the mare by the reins, gently stroking her long
mane to erase her fears then, vaulting into the saddle, wheeled around, and
galloped along the descending course in the right direction.
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(END OF SECTION 8)