LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 7
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01- NEVETSECNUAC (JP) |
Nevetsecnuac, as a just then released floating spirit witnessed his out-of-body tragic demise: He saw his catapulted, airborne head hitting the immense boulder a few feet away with a thud while his decapitated body that same instant simply collapsing lifeless to the ground. And ironically at that very moment, the drizzling rain drops amalgamating (merging) with the gushing blood from the severed carotid artery (of the neck), in that cumulative pool, instantaneously dyed (tinted) the pretty white wildflowers that Nevetsecnuac had been so fond of, into scarlet (crimson) hue.
Before the ground had a
chance to completely quench its thirst, Zonar, with a sinister, venomous grin,
thoughtful air and leaden steps, walked over to Nevetsecnuac's severed head
and, halting at the spot, summoned it up to the strange object in his grasp.
The bloody head was slowly but surely was absorbed (infused, seeped into) by the
object, disheveled hairs and all.
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02- ZONAR KUNTZU - 2 (9) |
Zonar with a malevolent grin, he then dramatically kissed the knob(handle) and, throwing his head back, ejected horrid laughter, after which he indifferently tugged it beneath his belt; his blazing sword sheathed (in scabbard, casing) and, with a cold glint in his eyes, never looking back, not even once, he swaggered slowly towards his tethered mount.
Summarily, with
Nevetsecnuac's head permanently imprisoned alongside Fradel Rurik Korvald's,
both within the leather-bound rod object, Zonar vaulted onto his magnificent
steed and galloped into distance.
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Nevetsecnuac’s soul
(essence, spirit) already restrained (held captive) in the netherworld,
meanwhile, riled and despondent, he’d watched Zonar’s unimpeded departure with
his prizes.
Hearing a shuffling noise
behind him just then, Nevetsecnuac quickly turned to witness the large
gathering of troubled, grim apparitions. As these ghosts drew nearer still and
floated to encircle him in a tight, impenetrable cordon, some clasped their
heads and tore out clumps of their hair, tragically wailing while others shook
an accusing finger at Nevetsecnuac and cursed or severely reprimanded him.
"It was your vanity
that made you vulnerable and made you fight that devilish villain."
"You should have
resisted him."
"You should have set
your priorities right at the start and saved your strength for the chief
culprit instead."
"You received ample
warning not to engage him, why did you not heed his advice and flee to safety
at the start while you still had a chance to do so? Now you have forfeited your life and your
life's ambition is lost forever in vain. This dreadful ending should come to
pass- after your honorable father the benevolent Seventh Prince Shon Alric
Therran Valamir, the illustrious Lord Shonne Gulbrand and the heroic Lord Lord
Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon and countless others sacrificed so much to avail you
of this chance. Oh, calamity…oh such misfortune!"
"This letdown is
inexcusable!"
"You should be sorely
mortified, ashamed of yourself! Ashamed
to face the Lord of Heaven; that is, if he ever designs (condescend) to see
you."
"Oh, what's the
use? Why should we waste our time
remonstrating with you? You are beneath
our contempt!" Some scowled.
"It’s because of you
that we are all now doomed, doomed; with our last chance of salvation gone
forever!"
"Ah, it’s no
use. It’s too late; too late for
everything; too late even for regrets."
Other, kindlier spirits
were not so hard on Nevetsecnuac, though they still condemned him.
"Were we wrong in
pinning all our hopes on you?"
"Did we overestimate
your abilities?"
"Perhaps it was too
much to ask, to expect of one lone (solitary) mortal, as young and
inexperienced as you, to rectify this wrong.
Still, your uncle Lord Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon taught you well. Furthermore, you had great potential, and you
did overcome all the other prior perils."
"Was it fate that
played this cruel, oh cruelest trick on you and us by bringing forth this
obstruction at this latest stage?"
"But, chance or no
chance, you should have succeeded. You
can't escape, can’t be absolved, not entirely, from all the blame.”
“With your innate
intelligence, could you not have assessed your situation in time to salvage
it? You also didn't have to fight him to
the bitter end, especially after you realized the hopelessness of your
situation. Isn't retreat a good part of
any fighting strategy?"
"Therefore, our
brothers are right in condemning you.
The fault lies entirely with you."
"You are solely to
blame for not living up to your full potential."
"Look how badly you
fouled things up!"
They shook their heads and
ground their teeth in anger.
"You, our last hope,
have let us down so miserably. You
failed to avenge us, just when success was within your grasp."
"Why did you have to
go throw it all away? If only you had
not succumbed too…"
"Ah, what's the
use? All is now lost with no other
worthy one left alive to champion our cause."
"What could be more
tragic than this? Forever barred from
Heaven, we, loyal subjects of Wenjenkun, your illustrious forefathers, we are
all condemned to roam this Earth in chains for all eternity. This is the gravest consequence of your
failure!"
"Woe to us!"
"Woe to them!"
"Woe to you!"
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03- NEVETSECNUAC IN THE UNDERWORLD |
Nevetsecnuac's soul, standing in doleful (forlorn) supplication, bowed his head still lower in shame, regretting his folly in underestimating Zonar's prowess, for not fleeing when he had the chance. He wanted so much to implore their forgiveness but, though he tried, no one took any notice of him. Instead, the din of their legitimate grievances and the intensity of their repeated wailing deafened his ears and silenced his tongue.
"After the siege,
when defenses failed and I was captured alive, I was flailed (flogged) to
death, but not before witnessing my comrades’ crueler demises, those that
fought bravely alongside me, being torn apart or crushed to death." one
wailing ghost came forward to demand.
"I suffered so many unspeakable hardships in my earlier life. I'm suffering so much now. It’s inconceivable to think that I, we all,
will not be vindicated, that we won't be avenged at long last. Oh, will this wretchedness never end?"
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04- WRETCHED PLACE |
"Stone missiles raining on us day and night within the confines of fortress, the tragic cries of the wounded (or the maimed) trapped under the collapsing walls and beams, still haunts my ears and robs me of any peace (solace)." Another came forth to profess. "Is there really no other left alive, competent enough, to avenge us?"
"My whole village was
burned to the ground by the imperial troops." an elderly woman
whimpered. "None escaped the
searing flames of this deliberately set catastrophe. How can all these tragic souls roaming this
earth find any peace or lasting rest without being avenged?"
"Our village was
flooded. Men, women, and children
drowned to give Zakhertan Yozdek’s army the advantage in a naval assault. Can they all have suffered for nothing?"
"Our homes were razed
to dust." Yet another wept.
"What about his
infant children?" one sympathetic soul, came forward to ask. "Can we not implore Heaven to spare
them?"
The multitude of shaking
heads told him otherwise. They could not
reach the ears of Heaven. It was
Nevetsecnuac’s fate to perish young.
"My loyal regiment
fought a desperate battle to the bitter end in our defense of the besieged
Kosuk City.", the tired, somber voice of an old general exclaimed,
reminiscing.
"We were overwhelmed by the sheer numbers
of Zakhertan Yozdek's army and by their superiority in arms. His were the picked troops, the best in the
land. When they penetrated our walls and
entered the city they committed such heinous atrocities, so vile they were that
it could never be wholly described."
Another officer groaned,
"In our offensive campaign, just as we had gained more ground, they
successfully cut us off from the main body of our army and the supplies. As we were trapped by an onslaught from four
directions, they set fire to the grass around our perimeter; every last one of
us perished by the raging flames."
"Our contingent was
deliberately isolated from the main force, too and lured into ambush where all
expired by their vile butchery." another officer gritted his teeth.
"All the defenders at Juko Pass, including myself, were ensnared, then buried alive. The traitorous Zakhertan Yozdek's rage still not appeased, he had his henchmen round up our families and had them killed as well, their corpses then piled on top of us."
"In my hometown, all
the young men who resisted were brutally trampled to death under the Royal
infantry horses’ hoofs in the central square as part of a war game, while we,
their parents and families were made to watch, till our turn came to die." The elderly man sobbed then, choking back his
tears, added, "But my poor, proud, brave boy, he cursed Zakhertan Yozdek,
that vile usurper, to the very end."
“I've heard some of these atrocities before.” Nevetsecnuac tearfully reflected.
Some
had been re-counted by Lord Asger Zhon prior to Nevetsecnuac’s departure;
several more accounts had been relayed by Fradel Rurik Korvald erstwhile the night Nevetsecnuac had left him;
and then a great deal more had been narrated by the faithful Lu Moldan, the
beggar from Gulbrand Province.
“Was Heaven blind? How could it stand by and let the
fiend (man) who’d been the instigator of these immeasurable crimes, not be
struck down? Zakhertan Yozdek, the villainous usurper… With these grave crimes
against humanity on his head, how could he still exist…to?"
"My precious, most
handsome boys, one barely sixteen, the other seventeen,” Another elderly woman
had shrieked just then, however, interrupting Nevetsecnuac’s incensed (feelings
and), exasperated thoughts. “They were
dragged through the streets and afterwards their tattered corpses were thrown
over the falls! “She turned and with upturned face and a mouth showing sparse
teeth, she snarled at Nevetsecnuac next.
“Now look at what you’ve done… It’s all
because of you, Zakhertan Yozdek will live to a ripe old age!"
"Ah, the brutality of
Zakhertan, the extent of it can never fully be told." Adjacent to her, an ancient ghost with white
beard down to his midriff shook his head and then mournfully nodded.
"His wolfish troops
and murderous guards were given liberty to run amok in our city of Kier. They inflicted unspeakable atrocities of the
innocent populous, young and old alike."
“Now… take a good
look.” He held out two round orbs in his
hand. "These eyes, I plucked them out in my grief after seeing those
appalling acts committed at the hand of the barbaric imperial troops, which
afterwards, many officers standing on the sidelines, treating it as
entertainment, even placed wagers on the nature of the outcome of the
wounds.
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06- ZAKHERTAN'S WOLFISH TROOPS |
“In my province, the tombs of our ancestors were indiscriminately defiled. “Another ghost chimed in. “They trampled over the dead, excreted the coffins (caskets) and cast aside dismembered corpses, looking to pillage valuable funeral offerings and items within the graves. Even an invading enemy nation would not have been so vile, so unconscionable, and so despicable; alas, terrible evil has shrouded this land! I cursed the day I was born and shed many bloody tears for all the unfortunate souls, including my own. What crime have I committed? I have asked this of Heaven, repeatedly…But no answer has come. You tell me, what crime have we, any one of us committed that Heaven has so completely forsaken us? Yes, you were our very last hope. Was it unfair of us to expect so much from but one youth? Tell me, please, would someone tell me why we must suffer so? Will this tragedy never end?"
"How many more must
perish at Zakhertan's cruel hand?"
“Wow to us…Pity… oh pity
us…” The wailing reached a crescendo
(climax) with increasingly more spirits (ghosts) joining in.
“Is there really nothing I
can do to atone for my mistakes?
“Nevetsecnuac’s heart incessantly wrenched with disgrace and bottomless
sorrow while blazing remorse, eternally scorched his soul to cinders.
Clenching his fists, he
bowed his head low in shame. “Is there anything, anything at all, I can do to
make amends, to redeem these tragic souls?”
Not resigned to this ill fate, he lifted his
eyes imploringly and made his plea, beseeching Heaven for one more chance. But hope was not to be, instead, Nevetsecnuac
saw his grandfather, Emperor Zuronghan Alric Therran Valamir, his father,
Seventh Prince Shon Alric Therran Valamir and the other members of the Royal
Family all, being escorted down to Earth in chains.
His grandfather Emperor Zuronghan
A.T. Valamir turned to glance at Nevetsecnuac with solemn air and
disapprovingly shook his head.
Endless tears coursing
down his cheeks, Nevetsecnuac rushed to at once fall on his knees and
respectfully prostrate himself before his grandfather, to beg forgiveness.
The emperor, with a grave
face, gave him no chance to speak and right away scorned Nevetsecnuac,
"You are not worthy of being our grandson nor are you fit to approach our
Royal Presence. Be gone from our sight!"
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07- EMPEROR ZURONGHAN ALRIC THERRAN VALAMIR |
The Emperor Zuronghan Valamir then, with great dignity, turned his back to Nevetsecnuac.
In unison, the rest echoed
the sentiments of the emperor and each, in turn, abruptly turned their backs to
him as Nevetsecnuac tried to make his appeal or implore their forgiveness.
Lord Shonne Gulbrand’s
apparition, bound in chains as well, became visible just then but His Lordship
also shook his head in disapproval and, shedding a solitary tear, he also
turned away and floated into the distance.
In deep dismay,
Nevetsecnuac shook his head and stamped his foot. “If only I had not…
Had not what?” This was something entirely different. As confusion set in, Nevetsecnuac racked his
brains to recollect, “Recollect what?”
Though Nevetsecnuac knew
it was only mid-morning, the Earth that instant suddenly fell into
twilight. The overwhelming, grave
atmosphere heralded (portended) a new gargantuan disaster or a colossal
catastrophe.
(END OF SECTION 7)