LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC – THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL – SECTION 7
The beast that was Dwengzur, shrieking as if to deafen the dead, transformed into a giant python and then coiled around Fradel’s (Nevetsecnuac's) body, squeezing, and squeezing, restricting his breathing, and threatening to crush every bone. Yet, once more, Fradel (Nevetsecnuac's) imagination fought the spell and won the battle. Reluctantly, the python eased his grip, only to open its mouth wide, intending to swallow Fradel whole.
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| 01-MONSTER SERPENT |
Maddeningly, the unfazed Scholar now chortled in mystical serpent’s face. "Haven't you eaten enough already; I’d think twice about that if I, were you! You know full well I'm not going to perish, and I can do lot more harm in your gut than I can out here."
His bluff worked. The numinous python recoiled and instantly
vanished in a puff of smoke and light. Fradel (Nevetsecnuac) found himself once
more seated back at the table across from disgruntled (peeved) Dwengzur, as if
non of that had happened.
Glaring at him over the rim of his cup, Dwengzur finished his
sip then, shaking his head, ejected coldly, "You are indeed an exceptional
being. For a human you are quite remarkable if I should say so myself. I can
see now what qualities Zonar saw in you. I would like to indulge you some more,
but I am rather pressed for time."
He glanced down for a brief second then returned his icy gaze to Scholar
Fradel.
"I am going to ask you just one more time, and that is
only because such a remarkable iron-willpower has earned you a measure of my
respect; will you voluntarily submit to, my probing of your mind?"
“I’ll not now nor ever, oblige you in this unreasonable
request." Fradel (Nevetsecnuac) responded resolutely because his distrust
of Dwengzur had now reached its zenith. He would hence, come-what-may, be
defiant and guard his secret.
Equally obdurate (obstinate), Dwengzur regretted that which he
must do next; for he needed to uncover the extent of damage Zonar had done then
deal with the problem accordingly. This last refusal afforded him the perfect
excuse and means of absolution for the outrage he must now commit.
"Very well,
then." he shook his head dismally, "You’ve left me no other choice.
You have only yourself to blame if things go awry and you are reduced to…”
Dwengzur checked his tongue abruptly; but the grave threat implicit in his
tone, gave Nevetsecnuac (Fradel) cause for concern and he pondered for a spell,
on potential future consequence.
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| 02- FRADEL (NEVETSECNUAC) |
Dwengzur in the interim had also paused, hopeful that Fradel
would relent, yet no change was forthcoming.
"Fool! With your own obstinacy you have signed your own
death warrant or perhaps even a fate worse than that." Dwengzur shrugged off his irritation and
looked away. “And thence, I will not be held accountable for the probable
consequences." He muttered as if to reassure himself.
In truth (actuality), Dwengzur would rather not have resorted
to that extreme measure, for to do so would be a mark of failure, admittance
that he had been unsuccessful in mastering this situation, in besting this
primitive life form.
Again, looking away, Dwengzur took mental inventory of the
probable damage that Fradel Rurik Korvald might suffer, because of the “Tashork”
spell: First, there was a good chance
that Fradel would come out of it dull-witted (stupid, slow) or even brain dead.
Dwengzur had seen it happen before and it was not a pretty sight. Second, if
this human still had significant contributions to make in his lifetime, his
zombie state would seriously impede (hinder) or even alter providence (the
course of destiny); then being held accountable, he (Dwengzur) would suffer the
ultimate (extreme) punishment.
“Blasted, obstinate human; since you are forcing my hand, you
should be held solely responsible for any dire outcome, not I; then again,” he
paused to consider this: Regardless of circumstance, had his master ever shown
any mercy, afforded him any sort of leeway? Dwengzur grumbled, fearing the
worse.
Having run out of options, Dwengzur now uttered the
incantation: “Tashork”, its power second only to that spell which raised the
dead.
Nevetsecnuac (Fradel)
watched in wonder as the immortal Dwengzur changed his physical form and he became
something entirely different. His eyes glowed and then blazed crimson and
harsher, until they reached an incredible brightness in intensity; subsequently,
an ancient cryptogram (symbol) manifested on his bare chest as the several streams
of surging (electric) energy swirled about his body.
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| 03- DWENGZUR ALTERING HIS APPARENCE |
Try as he might, Nevetsecnuac (Fradel) could neither look away
nor close his eyelids. Suddenly two blinding bolts of white light shot out from
Dwengzur's burning orbs to, sear through Fradel’s (Nevetsecnuac’s corneas)
irises, to eventually attach themselves like shackles to the back of his eyes.
Subsequently that part too, painfully melted away as the piercing light
penetrated to the centre his brain.
Mesmerized, Nevetsecnuac was rendered powerless to prevent the
steady infringement which permeated next, deep into the very recesses, the very
core of his (soul) being. Unable to
resist this most potent of magic, in his frozen state Nevetsecnuac, with eyes
wide open, was forced to endure being terribly violated (breached) till such a
time when he sank into a deep, vacant stupor.
In few minutes Dwengzur had retrieved the information he
needed and much, much more.
Dwengzu had, meanwhile, severed the link and hence, once more
reverted to his old form (appearance). He sat back pondering on all that amassed
knowledge; all that he, through clairvoyant (psychic, telepathic) means, had learned
about the recent past, and the immediate future yet to unfold. His gaze affixed
on this remarkable, though enigmatic (mysterious), heroic Prince, he studied him
long and hard, cataloging the intriguing facts and accidental fluctuations, into
proper apertures (slots) in his brain. He
smiled, having now fully grasped, just what it was that had made Fradel Rurik
Korvald, rather, Prince Nevetsecnuac Alric Therran Valamir, (also known by so
many other, assumed names, Svein, Audun Codenz, Tonng Yennik,) such a
remarkable, worthy individual; he carried the gene of Ingolf, the founding
father of Wenjenkun, and that’s why he had stood out so tall above the rest of
the mortal rabble around him. Dwengzur had, furthermore, grasped that the basis for the affinity and
mutual respect between Zonar and Nevetsecnuac being much more; and finally,
despite all of his bigoted protestations, conceeded that the prince had as well
now secured his (Dwengzur’s) lasting admiration.
Nevetsecnuac’s past combats in the moral realm alone, were
enough to stir his (Dwengzur’s) essence to the very core. In that brief
instant, Dwengzur had drunk deep of this most intoxicating wealth of human
emotions: the boundless, infinite love, the uncompromising sense of duty,
intense loyalty, supreme sacrifices, the filial piety, and the remarkable
courage not only of Nevetsecnuac’s, but also of the rest (contacts, his
associates). So passionately intense these overpowering emotions had been that
it had pierced his, (figuratively speaking,) stone heart and shaken him to the
very root, altering his lifelong attitude (estimation), as well, eradicating
all his prior prejudices against humans.
Dwengzur additionally sympathized with Nevetsecnuac’s past endured
hardships, and he appreciated akin rebellious defiant acts, towards his oppressors.
Dwengzur, meanwhile, had glimpsed at the immediate future, within a month,
events beyond that were hidden to him; and so, he glanced towards Zaur Stugr,
seated at the side, little ways off, and then shook his head.
“Pity,
that outcome could have been altered significantly if it were not for the
pervasive mistrust imbued in every facet of their beings. However, he could not
see providence too far ahead; so perhaps the outcome could still be different.”
Dwengzur did have it within his means to change this, but the
law forbade interference in fate (providence), and that law could never be
broken. “Perhaps if I put forward an
appeal to my master and through him to Elder Aegeus?” He looked down grimly and shook his head,
knowing the uselessness of such an attempt.
Draconian laws…Shame of it all. For there could be
no exception to those irrevocable rules.
But just as abruptly the feeling of dishonor (shame), a newly
acquired strange notion, now gnawed at him. Having lived through Nevetsecnuac’s
experiences, his innate selfish, sadistic, vile, crass, and vindictive nature
had been, albeit temporarily, altered. Dwengzur at present, moreover, felt
compassion and mercy also invading his heart for the first time ever. With this
strange, alien concept, suddenly, goodness was born in him, and he desired to
be benevolent. He will start by helping this prince; there must be a
way to circumvent, at least some of that dire portended peril, and so, he
raked (combed) his brains for doable succor (assistance, support).
Oh, but wait, there was still more! …
Dwengzur’s innate powers had suddenly detected this, surprising
(unbidden), telepathic divulgence (acknowledgement, transmission) emanating
from Prince Nevetsecnuac’s subconscious mind. This part had been prior hidden
from Dwengzur, because Prince Nevetsecnuac was entirely ignorant of it as well.
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| 04- THE UNEXPECTED REVELATION |
What was that?! The updated information that was, unpredictably
forthcoming, revealed to Dwengzur now- because of his rare, outstanding clairvoyant
abilities to see the past events, not in entirety but sometimes in erratic glimpses,
manifestations, and this had been one such glitch- was most extraordinary revelation
to assimilate. An electrifyingly startling fact that it was, it temporarily halted
(paused)his breath and interrupted Dwengzur’s core being (his vital essence).
Even so, taking hold of his senses, Dwengzur accepted the full
measure of this streaming account, and now he became indubitably aware of these
starkly dangerous revelations that had rushed to compound his worry:
Prince Nevetsecnuac’s lineage, from maternal side, was…. This
new revelation shocked Dwengzur to the core; he could not believe what he was assimilating
(absorbing, learning) … He had also acquired the vital, most sobering, shocking
revelations about Nevetsecnuac’s innate (distinctive) genetic factors… It
explained, why his existence (life) was so vital (imperative) to Elder Aegeus,
Elder Olavingemar, Elder Sthetor
and
more importantly, to Zonar. Now that he knew the identity of Nevetsecnuac’s
mother, with that dawned the realization
that this young man was nephew of… Zonar…. And furthermore, he carried the
ancient bloodline, akin Elder Aegeus (of Karn) and Kongrus, of Elder
Olavingemar and Elder Sthetor … and
much, much more… The presaged (portended) consequences were astounding! Oh
my!
Dwengzur had considered it, only for a spell, to readily let his
master acquire this knowledge at the time of his inevitable capture; the shock
of it, might spare him from the severest part of his punishment, the dreaded
chastisement, result of his audacious feat, his absconding (escaping) from his
prison.
Dwengzur, shook his head dismally, knowing all too well of his
master’s temperament, aware (understanding) also that nothing would lessen his certain,
horrific reprimand (penalty).
In truth, Dwengzur hated his master, for his long borne
(endured) cruel enslavement…. His master was entirely devoid of any feeling or
mercy; besides which, Dwengzur suspected, his master (more a warden), his everlasting
tormentor, was more ambitious than he led on, and that he for a long while, not
unlike Sthetor, had espoused a secret agenda….
If his master acquired (learned, absorbed) any of these forbidden
facts and chose to collude with Sthetor, this remarkable being’s life would be
forfeit…Nevetsecnuac would be hunted down and eliminated instantly by Sthetor.
As for the prophesy…Dwengzur wanted that to happen... Hah, what
a joke! Here was a rare chance for retribution (payback, reconning). He wanted the Elders of Karn completely obliterated,
consequence of kinfolk (clan, relations) pitted against each other, paving the
way for an absolute domination of both realms. The altruistic Karn’s swift elimination
would then be a certainty after the annihilation of all mortal realms, as Sthetor
had always been the secret vassal of the restrained, ultimate evil incarnate…
Dwengzur pensively nodded in the affirmative when the stark
realization set in; by then, he’d fully comprehended (grasped) the high stakes,
convinced now that this anomaly (incongruity), this young prince endowed
(gifted) with such remarkable faculty (prowess and rare bloodline from both
parents), had solely the potential, a unique variance to alter even his (Dwengzur’s)
doomed existence. Moreover, he wished to protect this gallant youth… and felt
strongly that the prince deserved to live and accomplish what he was destined
to do. Thus, it was imperative that his master be forbad (prevented, hindered)
from acquiring any of this vital info he now possessed! He was also determined
to keep this secret, everlastingly, not only from his master but also from the
Elders of Karn and more importantly, the evil incarnate Sthetor of Kongruls.
A deep concern, subsequently, furrowed his brow, for he did
not know how best to stop his master from acquiring this data the instant (moment)
Dwengzur was captured and claimed, and this inevitability was only a matter of
time. Long before this, he’d resigned himself to the anticipated tenfold hellish
torment for his already committed breach; so why not compound his deemed
felonious acts, with just one more: That’s right, there was that!
He smiled. There was only one way to keep all the
pertinent data about Nevetsecnuac’s true origin (ancestry), as well, the info
about the magic brush/sword, from ever being disclosed; he would permanently
erase, purge it entirely, from both his conscious and subconscious mind, by way
of “Expunging (purging) Hex”.
This recently acquired unusual incantation (spell) had once
before, enabled him to escape certain repercussions from his master. That
memory being removed, he could not recall what blunder (fault) had been which
needed erased, what it was about, except that it had something to do with being
duped by Egil Viggoaries ….
what? Why was he thinking of …. shapeshifting? No matter…. Dwengzur shrugged,
and focusing instead, on the present dilemma, he disdainfully (scornfully)
grunted. Hmm, unfortunately, he’d
paid a hefty consequence (price) after invoking that Spell!
That awful repercussion being still so fresh in his memory,
that excruciating pain… he was naturally reluctant to repeat it. But
feeling genuine remorse for what he had done to this fine prince, also for
selfish reasons, wanting to get back at his master and wanting to beget willful
harm to Elders of Karn- Dwengzur, first isolating and then concentrating (focusing)
on the specific memories- he hastily invoked “Expunging Hex”, before he had a
chance to change his mind.
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| 05- DWENGZUR PERFORMING -EXPUNGING HEX |
After it was all over, what he wished to forget completely expunged
from memory and, thankfully his suffering had assuaged, specific memories completely
gone (being removed), he could not rightly recall what blunder (fault) he had
committed this time. Despite the brain fog however, he felt the urgency of it
and that it had something to do with the scholar, Fradel Rurik Korvald and that
he needed it to fix it. Something about a mistake…. Dwengzur, turned and
apologetically stared (gazed, took a good long look) at Fradel…Or , rather
Nevetsecnuac, that’s right, he now recollected, that was his true name.
“If your cause is just, you will
have had the protection of Gods … That is what’s need now.” Dwengzur moaned; he hesitated for a moment,
fearing the possible dreaded outcome of using the neutralizing “Ne-Tashork”
spell, on Nevetsecnuac. Then, bracing self, Dwenzur intoned (chanted, hummed) the
counter spell to and afterwards, blew a breath onto Nevetsecnuac's face.
As he waited, he inwardly prayed for the other’s true self to
emerge unscathed from that violent intrusion. For a second, feeling like an
eternity, nothing had changed in those blank eyes then, to Dwengzur’s great
relief, he saw the rekindled (embers,) smoldering fires of anger, increasing in
intensity in Nevetsecnuac's pupils.
Instantly, Nevetsecnuac knew his true identity had been exposed.
"Now that you know, just what are your intentions?" Livid with rage, he was prepared to die if
needed be, in the attempt to stop Dwengzur.
Unexpectedly, Dwengzur smiled and bowed to Nevetsecnuac
respectfully. His voice filled with unmistakable remorse; he apologized for his
presumption and quickly reminded the prince of the policy of noninterference.
"You have grievously misjudged me," he added in a
hurtful tone. "I truly meant you no real harm. Besides, all this could
have been avoided had you instead of goading (provoking), exhibited least bit
of faith (trust) in me. Naturally, I had consulted the stars and already knew
the fated outcome before I warned Egil Viggories about Fradel Rurik Korvald, or
rather yourself. I knew even then that
none of the Dark Eunuch’s actions would alter anything, and they didn't, had
they? You are here safe, are you not?"
Nevetsecnuac was about to respond when he was cut short by a
sudden mounting sound of an angry thunder overhead that shook the building to
its foundations. To his amazement he noted the undisguised fear in Dwengzur's
eyes.
“What…
Is he trembling?”
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(END OF SECTION 7)

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