LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 4
In truth the Immortal Zonar Kuntzu’s loss was only temporary; after an arduous effort, he would eventually regain (recover) all that he’d lost.
Nevetsecnuac could not of course have imagined the extent of
hazard he’d at present instigated, for the danger unleashed upon the world,
albeit temporary, was very much real, as this amulet (that had housed the
dangerous entity Cassar, who was called Mokak, later renamed, Jenor) was in
fact more than Zonar’s family heirloom (a birthright article). The imprisoned
entity within the amulet had once been bound to Zonar’s father Zandar Kuntzu’s
genetic factor (DNA).
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01- ZANDAR KUNTZU |
Zandar, though later was considered a renegade Immortal, had once despite his youth, had held a prominent position within the ruling elite (of elders), of the ancient race of Karn. Upon Zandar’s demise, because of his specific genetic link to Zonar, this onerous responsibility of safekeeping the amulet, a lifelong sentence that could not be erased or shirked (evaded, dodged) whatever the circumstance, had then been (trussed, tethered) passed down to Zonar.
Centuries earlier Cassars, a troublesome race had been the
catalyst of a catastrophic dissention (discord) among existing ancient races;
set against one another the irreconcilable differences and disparaging venom
had resulted in the eventual destruction of the many primordial elite powers.
Only the most resilient race of Karn (and few other races that had integrated
within its modules) had triumphed; hence, decade later ending the cataclysmic
wars and furthermore, conquering then imprisoning, the few remaining Cassars of
this unruly (rowdy) race that had instigated (triggered) it all.
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02 - CASSARS ) |
Adversarial elements of these Cassars properly contained, spanning several centuries now the armistice (truce and resulting concord) had lasted on Earh, as the dominant race of Karn, as well, few remaining subsidiary custodians of this world, had peacefully coexisted well hidden in the remotest corners (chiefly at the summits and at the icy peaks), result of having graciously allowed the species of men the sole dominion over (placid, more climatically favorable, more livable parts of the) Earth.
It would have been far better for the world, if this
troublesome race Cassars had been totally expunged; however, by consensus of
the elders of Karn, Cassars had been subjugated (bested by the utilization of
ice or water) though spared from total annihilation.
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03- (ELDERS OF KARN) |
Elders of Karn had, moreover, additionally afforded mankind that definite measure of safety- by constraining, rather, indefinitely imprisoning few spared Cassars, in the protective water crystal amulet that selected members of Karn wore. It was a bane (burden) to be endured till the end of time. In the unlikely event the prior custodian would expire, the amulet would then be (transferred) bequeathed to the offspring sharing the same genetic factor. Now under normal circumstances, Zonar’s immortal father would have discussed in detail the amulet’s range of powers and, even given his son some necessary, precise instructions (pointers) to maintain absolute control over the imprisoned entity; however, Zonar, sent away for his own safety at an early age to grow up among anonymous mortal family, had never been afforded this opportunity.
Furthermore, the subsequent bizarre circumstances that
elicited (caused) the premature, atypical (odd) demise of renegade Immortal
Zandar Kuntzu, and hence, well before Zonar could master the amulet’s
intransigent powers, Cassar entity called Mokak, with his resourcefulness had
once, successfully affected its escape from captivity. (Check out: Legend of
Nevetsecnuac, Book 2 titled The Ordeal, more precisely, Section 8, where Mokak
is mentioned.)
At that time Zonar, wanting to know more about this amulet and
the entity it contained, had avidly perused those veiled (oblique, coded)
secret teachings his father Zandar Kunzu had left with him, but since the
situation of escape (of any Cassar) had never once transpired (occurred),
not while the amulet had been in his father’s safekeeping, it had taken Zonar
many more months of quest and sheer luck, to capture and re-enslave sly Mokak
(later renamed Jekor ) in the crystal Amulet. Since then, Zonar on his own
merit, through trial and error, utilizing his brilliant and discerning mind,
had discovered few more facets of the amulet’s varied, multitude powers.
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04 - ZONAR KUNTZU |
Currently, during combat with Nevetsecnuac, when the amulet broke in two this, despite Zonar’s stoic, stone countenance- mindful of the now matured and at large entity’s, Jekor (Mokak)’s inherently grown prowess’s and the unimaginable, portended havoc he could unleash on the unsuspecting world and on both (mortal and immortal) realms- seriously troubled Zonar. Anticipating the arduous task of, recapturing this willy, artful and now more potent menace, caused Zonar to, pensively (thoughtfully) but with unreadable expression, glance away.
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05- (MOKAK- ALSO KNOWN AS JEKOR) |
Sensing only an inkling of the magnitude (scope) of the dire circumstance, Nevetsecnuac knitted his brows, and covertly pinned his questioning gaze on Zonar; as he, same time fought the ominous foreboding that had suddenly vice-griped his heart. “Had he inadvertently, seriously harmed his benefactor Zonar by damaging the (potent)amulet, in the course of it, ending any chance of his enlisting Zonar future guidance?”
Nevetsecnuac now hastened to ask the latter’s forgiveness but
Zonar, after his fleeting icy, contemptuous glare, simply snorted and again
looked away. But then in afterthought, he’d quickly passed it off as fate and
dispassionately shrugged his shoulders; determined not to let this rare
opportunity (of further testing his nephew) be wasted, he just unfastened the
clasp and removed the chain, with the broken amulet ( crack in the middle now
emitting no light) still precariously hanging from it, from around his neck,
then walking to the edge of a high precipice, hurled it into river. He
watched its descent, it being swallowed by the fast-flowing waters then, with a
changed, resigned expression on his face, inclined (turned) his head to grimace
wryly at Nevetsecnuac.
Afterwards he simply walked back with large strides and
halting few inches away from Nevetsecnuac, cooly proposed that they might as
well continue the combat. When Nevetsecnuac showed some reluctance to engage
him, his short temper flared, and he roared in fury: “You dare to insult me?”
And then in lightening speed launched his murderous assault.
Forsaking his reserve, Nevetsecnuac fought back, at first on
the defensive but soon shifting to the offense.
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06- NEVETSECNUAC FIGHTS ZONAR |
The two combatants consequently, as one successive blur to the naked eye endlessly fought on in a dizzying whirlwind, or, in unrelenting fierce deadlock, back and forth, well into the night. The Earth rumbled incessantly at their extraordinary might while Heaven knew no peace from the sheer intensity of their powerful strikes. Once, as if in protest, a mounting flotilla of dark clouds congregated to shroud the moon and the stars, following it with angry rumbling and streaks of lighting miring (marking) the sky; meanwhile, quaking ground underfoot at times shook the soil (earth), debree and boulders loose, uprooting trees, creating gashes or deep chasms, to enforce termination of the relentless, vigorous combat. But still undaunted, the battle had raged on without ceasing in intensity. And when the first rays of dawn finally broke from hurrying (sailing) clouds, for Heaven had had enough, the rising gale winds punishingly swept across the Earth. Thunder and lightning more repetitiously now crashed about them and alight trees threatened to scorch them and reduce them to cinders. Subsequently, the torrential rains changed into hailstones, pounded mercilessly on their heads and turned the ground underfoot into muddy rivers.
Their persistence prevailing over Heaven’s will, eventually,
by about noon of the third day, the skies cleared up. The brilliant sun’s
golden rays bathed the drenched Earth and enveloped the brave warriors in
sweltering heat as they still fought on.
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07- ZONAR FIGHTS NEVETS (15) |
Suddenly however, Zonar, in mid blow, stayed his hand and leapt out of the circle of combat once more.
“Enough, I see now that a thousand more rounds will not
engender your defeat. I therefore salute you sir, as a true and unequivocal
equal. Despite your age, you bear the singular mark of a great warrior.”
Throwing back his head, he laughed uproariously.
“Ha! Ha! This is what I needed most to shake myself out of my
complacency. I thank you, sir, for this most invaluable lesson.”
Assuming a more serious expression, he then bowed low to Nevetsecnuac (his
nephew) in deep respect.
Bowing also, Nevetsecnuac reciprocated the courtesy.
“The honor is mine, sir, to have even met by half measure your
outstanding abilities.”
He next voiced his heart felt desire to become Zonar’s
tyro (novice, trainee, acolyte, follower, student).
“Though a feasible consideration, it’s not
convenient for me to accede at this time.” Clenching his fist
and musing, Zonar looked away in silence.
Zonar was in fact beginning to
worry, having lingered in one spot (and time zone) far too long; therefore,
risking being discovered by his ardent nemesis bent on his destruction.
Stealing a glance at Nevetsecnuac
from the corner of his eye, he further mused, “Yes in many ways, you
remind me of Tuko. Had my mortal younger brother, survived the massacre
he may have turned out exactly like you. But no! It’s not time yet…
And furthermore, with so much at stake, I can ill afford the indolence of
sentiment, hence, jeopardy (risk, hazard).” Nevertheless, he felt
constrained to give Nevetsecnuac, a palpable (tangible, convincing) excuse.
“I am tempted, sir. But I fear that such, is out of the
question!” Zonar finally spoke in a restrained, somber voice.
He bit his lip, “To befriend you, my sworn enemy? Wenjenkun
and Korion, two strong adversary nations, will not do; for long exists the
lethal animosity, toxic rivalry between (our countrymen) both.”
He knit his brows and with clenched fists, he simply
looked away.
“Ney; for it would mean violating every fabric of my….
and forsaking loyalty to my Sovereign. How can I then, face my countrymen
with dignity?”
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08- NEVETSECNUAC DISSAPPOINTED |
As Nevetsecnuac, eyeing him curiously, remained lost for words, Zonar forced a smile onto his pallid lips then, as if in an afterthought, faced Nevetsecnuac and inclined his head gallantly.
“My name, sir, in all confidence, is Zonar Kuntzu. I’m a
native of Korion, born thirty-two years ago. That much I will divulge,
for you have well earned the right to know it. We will be meeting again,
though under what circumstances I cannot rightly predict. I pray,
however, that when that happens you will not judge me too harshly. Each
of us must follow the bidding of our loyal heart. Remember well my
parting words: ‘Even if I fail, I will not fail.’ “
Nevetsecnuac bowed to him in gratitude for the civil negation
(rejection, snub) but, when he lifted his eyes to confess his own true name,
the words froze on his tongue for, once more, Zonar had vanished into thin air
without a trace.
Nevetsecnuac nodded his head in deep understanding.
“Yes, we are kindred spirits and, it is evident we
share similar fate. Zonar Kuntzu, bound by duty, you are also headed for that
uncertain future (prospects)! Existing briefly perhaps on this Earth, though
more certainly me, we stive hard to accomplish that vital and arduous task, for
which only we are destined to do.”
“Till we meet again my friend; I am Nevetsecnuac Alric Therran
Valamir.” Nevetsecnuac whispered after Zonar, his eyes brimmed with tears.
“I wish you well and, bid you fond farewell, my esteemed,
elder brother.”
Nevetsecnuac subsequently retrieved the gift, the sword,
and after wiping the blade clean and sheathing it (placing it back in its
scabbard), inwardly invoked the word: Lomelak. The magnificent sword (with its
casing) instantly shrunk and reverted to an ordinary writing brush.
Nevetsecnuac was ecstatic; he’d never owned a magical sword before. Desiring to
test it again, he this time inwardly uttered (articulated) the word: Lohcnilik.
Lo and behold, the writing brush instantly became the magnificent, sheathed
sword again. And when it was again transformed into a writing brush, jubilant
(thrilled) Nevetsecnuac secured it on his person. He then quickly gathered up
his belongings and, not looking back, catapulted onto his horse, and raced
towards the Capital, the mare’s hooves churning up a cloud of dust behind him.
~
(End of Section 4)
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