LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 1
Fradel Rurik Korvald (Nevetsecnuac),
relentlessly pursuing Mouro Kerr, ascended several flights of stairs that led
upwards to the open air. As he took the
next sharp turn, however, he found himself face to face with Zonar Kuntzu,
grasping in his left hand, suspended by the hair, the ghastly severed head of
Mouro, dripping its blood onto the corpse at his feet.
"I abhor
debauched officials, but, even more, I despise devious cowards." Zonar
grunted, glowering at Mouro's head before he hurled it into the distance with
disdain.
His fiery eyes next
riveted on Fradel. "Our meeting was
not ordained for this night," he spoke sternly then, turning his back on
Fradel, walked away.
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01- ZONAR KUNTZU |
At that instant, however, Fradel leaped into the air and flipped over Zonar's head to land right before him and block his way.
Zonar, taken aback slightly, knit his brows,
"Are you courting death, sir?" He should actually had called him
nephew… but not yet! Zonar ruminated
(brooded, pouted).
Fradel, bowing in
respect, begged the warrior's indulgence and asked for Zonar's full name so
that he may offer his proper thanks to his benefactor who had, not once but
twice, rendered him a valuable service.
Zonar grimaced
wryly, "You are too polite sir.
Thanks, are neither warranted nor necessary, since I am only
reciprocating a kind turn rendered to me once."
He was about to
walk away again when Fradel more persistently barred his way, requesting an
introduction and a proper surname.
Checking his
annoyance, Zonar glowed. "And you,
sir, are you in turn willing to oblige me by disclosing your true (legitimate)
identity?" he asked with icy cynicism.
Taken aback
slightly, Nevetsecnuac burrowed his questioning eyes on Zonar. He hesitated, not wishing to insult (affront)
this formidable warrior's intelligence by insisting that he was, indeed, the
scholarly poet Fradel Rurik Korvald, yet still consumed with a desire to learn
just how much Zonar knew or suspected.
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02- FRADEL RURIK KORVALD (NEVETSECNUAC) |
"I thought not," Zonar interrupted the suspenseful air. "To each his own, then,” as he turned his back once more, he added in a thundering voice, "but I thank you for your courtesy; denial at this point would only have incurred my ire.”
Nevetsecnuac had,
just then, detected a familiar, slight accent in Zonar's dialect, one not
unlike that of the assassin Duan. Quite intrigued, Nevetsecnuac remained ever
more reluctant to let Zonar go; feet firmly planted on ground, he stubbornly
blocked Zonar’s path as his mind pondered.
“It has to be more than
paranoia, more than a mere fluke that our paths have crossed with such
frequency; but what importance does these coincidences entail?”
Nevetsecnuac had
first encountered Zonar innocently enough at Aguda and Yagu's Inn but, since
then, the strong sense (intuition) of being persistently stalked had both
intrigued and troubled him. Possessing
incredible prowess, Zonar had appeared and disappeared without a trace at will;
in Yenis Luko's room at Kuno Temple, then again at the trial, where he
disappeared dramatically in the midst of a crowd after issuing his threat to
Micen Do, and his sudden appearance again here. This could not all be mere coincidences;
therefore, what was it Zonar really after?
And since Nevetsecnuac could not ascertain the precise timing of
Zonar's (appearance) materialization at this last locale, he abstained from
theorizing why Zonar had not joined in the fray (combat) earlier on, either for
or against him. Zonar’s poignant reference to their impending future meeting,
on the other hand, merited probing. With Heng Erling’s treachery still fresh in
mind, Nevetsecnuac (forgoing all the conjecture,) glued his gaze on Zonar but
this time with a look of askance, wishing to engage him in friendly dialogue,
regardless of the consequences.
“Are you done,
probing?” Zonar was briefly amused.
"Your
persistence, however, is getting rather tiresome." Zonar stared down at
Nevetsecnuac. “Unfortunately, I am pressed for time and furthermore, I have no
wish to engage in dialogue or fight (test) with you at this point in time. “
Zonar was about to snap his fingers and simply disappear, but then on second
thought, he stayed long enough to add: “ I would think that your mind would be
beset with more pressing concerns, such as, the whereabouts of Fradel Rurik
Korvald's real identity papers. For without them, how could you gain entry to
the Capital to ultimately fulfill your destiny?"
Noting Nevetsecnuac's slight start at the
emphasis on the word 'real' he threw his head back and laughed raucously…Then,
before Nevetsecnuac could respond, "Oh, here."
In a flash Zonar produced the envelope from an
inner pocket and thrust it into Nevetsecnuac's hand.
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03- ZONAR KUNTZU |
"No need to thank me for them, either." he shrugged. "They were of no use to me, anyway."
Seeing that they
were, indeed, the originals and not the forgeries Mouro had spoken of,
Nevetsecnuac's heart filled with gratitude, and he looked up at once to thank
Zonar and to question him about it.
He was nowhere to be seen. Quite mysteriously once more, Zonar had
disappeared without a trace into thin air, with not even the slightest sound to
alert Nevetsecnuac's keen senses.
Frowning, Nevetsecnuac strained his eyes and scanned the area.
"Don't fret,
we'll be meeting again soon enough." the thunderous voice shook the skies,
and the subsequent roaring laughter trailed off into the distance.
Nevetsecnuac's
entreaties for him to halt, his dares to manifest himself fell on deaf ears so,
eventually, he gave up trying and returned to the matters at hand. Nevetsecnuac clad in more appropriate (armor)
travelling attire, first secured Hecun's sword, this along with his scholar's
vestments and identity papers in a bundle, Nevetsecnuac fastened them all onto
the harness of Mouro's charger (strong cavalry horse). He gave a proper burial
to Doctor Sullen and the others then vaulting the mare resumed his journey to
the Capital.
~
In the ensuing days and nights, Nevetsecnuac
could not shake the feeling of being monitored (watched) by an unseen entity;
for intuitively, despite the seeming absence of form, he certainly sensed unearthly
presence at every turn. It was like that of Zonar’s aura, a force, and yet not
quite the same… This presence was, inured, (callous, desensitized) yet same
time more deadly and, it definitely was in pursuit of something or someone,
other than him. Nevetsecnuac was just a conduit (channel, means); the phantom
hunter (tracker) had intangibly stalked him to attain real prey (target).
Nevetsecnuac did not know it, but he had instinctively detected the unseen
presence of an immortal, one called Dwengzur; who had been assigned to hunt
down and destroy the renegade Immortal before he reached his full potential.
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04- NEVETSECNUAC BEING MONITORED BY UNSEEN DWENGZUR |
A scant scent of target had led Dwengzur to that spot where the previous battle had taken place. Nevetsecnuac, a sole survivor emerging from the scene, warranted attention and therefore had been pursued; but when the mark (trace, hint), whatever was attached to this mortal had proven false, then one day Nevetsecnuac’s keen sensation of been persistently monitored, had abruptly cessed (terminated, ended).
~
Several days later,
however, the sensation of being observed by an unknown force had again returned,
though, this one was not hostile. Nevertheless,
Nevetsecnuac was bit peeved (annoyed, ticked off), that he’d been persistently for
some unknown reason was being monitored and audaciously, subtly tested; and so,
once after a long, tiring ride, when he halted for respite at the edge of a
thick forest, near a flowing creak, he’d shouted his dare into the air:
“If you are fair,
face me true, or, try another, more (effective) potent tactic.”
Subsequently, as he
waited for a response, (with his senses on high alert,) he’d perfunctorily laid
down his bedding under an ancient tree and, after starting a small campfire, his
eyes pensively watched the steed graze on the lush grass, then quietly sat down
to, for his sustenance, roast the already cleaned and gutted small game
(rabbit) he’d snared earlier on.
His hunger
satiated, after a bout (spell) of reflection, for disappointingly nothing
untoward had happening (manifesting): “Oh well,” shrugging his shoulders,
Nevetsecnuac briefly looked up at the cloudless sky overhead, which was
blanketed with stars that winked incessantly, then donning a knowing, broad
smile, he reclined and closed his eyes in sleep.
Suddenly, as if in
answer to his earlier challenge, an arrow pierced the air and, finding its
mark, got buried deep into the log where Nevetsecnuac had used as his pillow,
its shaft barely grazing the tip of his nose.
"You are back;
but surely you can do better!" Nevetsecnuac, unperturbed, chortled and,
pulling out the arrow, with ease, tossed it aside.
"Don't provoke
me, for I can ground your bones to dust with but a single blow."
A terrifying voice
boomed (roared) out of the darkness.
"You're
welcome to try." Nevetsecnuac masking his inner elation (excitement), with
a wry grin goaded presumed Zonar further, eyes still (closed) shut tight.
In a bolder move
yet, Nevetsecnuac simply shifted his body to get more comfortable and then
yawning, plaintively mumbled. "I’ve
had a long day’s ride but pray do your worst for; as yet, you have shown me
nothing of your vaunted might?"
The dare had barely
left his lips when, with a deafening, crackling sound, the ancient tree
sheltering Nevetsecnuac split right down the middle into two perfect halves. If
not for a nimble jump to safety, Nevetsecnuac would have been pulverized under
the enormous trunk as it came crashing (in big chunks) to the ground. His mare,
as luck would have it, was tethered to another tree opposite and so had escaped
the danger.
"How
unreasonable, this tree had existed for thousands of years yet perished in a
flash." Nevetsecnuac shook his head disapprovingly as he viewed the
damage. "Such is the vanity of
man."
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05- NEVETSECNUAC DISSAPPOINTED |
"You dare mock me?" Zonar's thundering voice, though he remained invisible still, quaked the ground under Nevetsecnuac's feet, suddenly splitting it wide open, with dislodged soil and rock subsequently plunging (plummeting) into a deep chasm (gorge).
Nevetsecnuac had
escaped this catastrophe by nimbly, in the nick of time, jumping to one side of
the precipice. After which, still
clinging onto the exposed roots at the edge, he’d hauled himself up to safety.
He nonchalantly dusted off his clothes while inwardly marveling at the other's
incredible powers.
Unperturbed, he
shouted out defiantly, “You had best resign (quit) tonight, for I refuse to
oblige your whims any longer. Sleep is
what awaits me now." This said, he
picked out another suitable ground under another ancient tree and reclined his
head. Nothing much happened that evening and he slept soundly till dawn.
(END OF SECTION 1) ~
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