LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 6
Nevetsecnuac had felt a twinge
of pain as the blade had, just then, carelessly, or perhaps deliberately; cut a
thin sliver into the flesh across his throat, making the blood trickle down
both sides of his neck.
Unflinching, Nevetsecnuac
smiled at Zonar Kuntzu. "I'm ready
for another bout (session), in fact I’ve been looking forward to break (end)
this tiresome monotony; however, you must first excuse my unceremonious
greeting of you." He then shifted
to lessen Zonar ‘s hold, but try as he might, he found himself solidly pinned,
trapped under the other's oppressive hold.
Worse still, he could feel the blood coursing in his veins gradually
ebbing (slowing down, fading) robbing
his vitals, his entire body, of the essential lifegiving force; that same
instance, he felt as if slipping into a catatonic state, limbs weighed down
like a solid rock or a huge bronze pot in defiance of his will, refusing to budge even in the slightest.
Zonar Kuntzu seemed
oblivious to this impediment; he only noted the fleeting shadow of concern
registering in Nevetsecnuac's eyes and so, Zonar grinned, "You hesitate?
Lest you fear, I have only lost miniscule faction of my powers?"
“Well, do you wish to fight me or not?
I never pegged you for a spineless opponent!” He let go and stood away.
“I’ll give you a headway in strike, go on!”
Nevetsecnuac wished to
respond but he could neither part his lips, nor was he able to utter the
slightest sound; instead, only a frustrated, guttural (rasping, rough) gurgling
came from his throat.
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01- ZONAR CHALLENGES NEVETSECNUAC ONCE MORE |
Zonar’s
subsequent response was baffling to Nevetsecnuac, especially since the other looked
as if offended (aggrieved, angry, hostile) for a fleeting moment or two- by
some perceived, brazen, insulting declaration (challenge) issued forth from
Nevetsecnuac’s mind.
"You are far too
reckless or brave, goading me so; nevertheless, I’m in no hurry to end your
life, not just yet. Not before I have
some fun, but I fear it may prove to be no contest at all and, worse still, it may
even bore me." Pursing his lips
disdainfully, Zonar, so uncharacteristically, coldly ejected and then shrugged.
"After all, I do possess an unfair
advantage over you. Or have you so
readily forgotten how I'm now very well acquainted with your fighting style, as
well, know your innate (inadequacies) limitations? “
“That's right, suffice to
say that what we shared before, glorious as it may have seemed to you, was only
a trifling test run. What you
encountered then, and found so hard to defend against, even after the loss of my
talisman, was but one twentieth of my force and ability." Suddenly Zonar’s countenance turned dark and
his expression fierce.
"Damn you!" he swore, gritting his
teeth.
"Why the hell did you
not stay where you were safe, instead of paying a pilgrimage to that worthless
Heaven's Gate Spiritual Temple, the den of mercenaries and spies? That vile, cursed place should have been razed
to the ground long ago, along with all the rest. You thought they would be worthy of your
trust because they were duty-bound (obligated), functioning under the cloak of
faith? Now, regrettably, you will have
to be slayed. You will all have to be eradicated
(eliminated), including your newborn twin son and daughter."
Zonar grimaced wryly, then
added thoughtfully, "Yes, save for one; your wife, who has been promised a
safe delivery into the hands of Emperor Deng Hedenko of Kontu, by my Sovereign
Lord (of Korion), therefore, sending me on this execrable quest (odious mission). But alas, I his loyal subject have been
entrusted with this task."
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02- EMPEROR OF KONTU DENG HEDNEKO |
"What! Lord Asger (Asger
Thuxur Marrog Zhon) and the twins will all be killed? My wife… my precious, beautiful Teuquob, will
be at the mercy of Deng Hedenko, that rancorous (malign) villain?"
Zonar’s
announcement (declaration) had sent a terrible lightning bolt (strike) through Nevetsecnuac's brain; next, an
all-consuming, searing rage had coursed through his veins and exploded in his
chest. His soul recoiling in terror, he
clenched his fists until his knuckles (turned white) cracked.
Externally, Nevetsecnuac’s
face had contorted somewhat tragically, his eyes revealing only a fleeting
glimpse of the raging, conflicting storm that tore up his spirit (core); with
remarkable
will thence, he checked this rising fury that threatened to unhinge (unbalance)
him. “No,” He
determinedly rejected the present reality; and moments later common sense had edified
(enlightened, informed) him to the truth, that this person before him, was someone
other than Zonar. Though he bore Zonar’s
(likeness) physical form, had similar eccentric (quirky, odd) attributes- his
innate character, his demeanor nevertheless was slightly off, and it could be
said even quite odd (alien).
Nevetsecnuac could not
rightly pinpoint the reason, but his intuition, the inner dread surmounted with
the foreboding feeling just then, had thus constricted (confined, held, caged)
his soul in a primordial vice (pure evil).
"I'll release you from
the spell (incantation) that binds you, soon enough," Zonar meanwhile, had
promised hardheartedly (stonily). "So that we may resume where we’d left
off; however, I trust that, before your glorious end, you will furnish me with
one more memorable battle."
"You'll have that, and
more!" Nevetsecnuac hissed, his tongue now released from the oppressive
hold to the utter amazement of Zonar.
For Nevetsecnuac somehow with his innate prowess (ability), had broken
the spell.
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03 - NEVETSECNUAC BREAKS THE SPELL |
“You never cease to amaze
me.” But before Zonar could react and shoot out searing beams from his pupils, pre-emptively
Nevetsecnuac's two fingers of his right hand had targeted Zonar's blazing eyes
while the left hand grasped Zonar's wrist clutching the hilt of his sword. In a contest of strength next, the blade was
forced away from Nevetsecnuac’s throat and cast off to one side, as
Nevetsecnuac simultaneously rolled his body, to pin Zonar under him on the wet
ground.
“I will not be underestimating you again.” Zonar's glaring expression mutely warned.
"Give me one, just one
good reason why I should spare your life." Nevetsecnuac demanded through
gritted teeth as his right hand gripped Zonar's throat in a death hold.
"What duress, what measure
of political liability (millstone) has Hedenko over your Sovereign that your
liege would force such a cowardly onus (to murder innocent children and to abduct
woman for delivery) onto you, his loyal subject?"
Half blinded by the blood
oozing from his eye sockets, Zonar remained unrelenting and defiantly spat into
Nevetsecnuac's face, gurgling, "Go to hell!"
Then, by no means helpless,
in the ensuing contest of strength Zonar, the summoned sword’s hilt once more
in his grip, his legs tightly wound around Nevetsecnuac's waist, the two,
interlocked as they were, rolled until at one point they both went over the
precipice and, after falling some measure as they scraped the jagged,
protruding rocks, plummeted headlong into the depths of the lake.
Zonar, being the first to
be freed from the choking, trapping net of submarine growth, swam ashore then,
brandishing his sword in readiness to hack, watched, and waited for his
adversary to surface next. His fiery eyes,
miraculously mended, combed the crystalline depths beneath the gently
undulating waves; suddenly however, Nevetsecnuac sprang up out of the water and
somersaulting in the air over Zonar's head, landed on his feet squarely behind
him.
Turning around in a flash
to confront Nevetsecnuac, Zonar grimaced at him wryly. "I shall certainly miss your amusing
calisthenics. Perhaps Lord Asger Thuxur
Marrog Zhon, your aged, crippled teacher, could be persuaded to perform the
same; that is, if he survives the first encounter with me."
Zonar was being
deliberately provocative, hiding the fact that he had, in fact, felt a secret
empathy and lasting admiration for that honorable old Lord, in view of all that
he had heard and learned about him.
"Don't flatter
yourself with your overrated confidence," came, Nevetsecnuac's hot
retort. Narrowing his eyes next, he
demanded, "So, you still want to go through with this?"
"You expected
less?"
"Then I shall be
forced to stop you. This time, however,
you won't be cheating death so easily." Nevetsecnuac warned coldly.
In fact, he was stalling to
attain more information about the informants, the spies inferred by Zonar,
though he was not entirely sure how he would convey this vital message to Lord
Asger Zhon once this adversary was bested (defeated) in combat.
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04- NEVETSECNUAC |
“Perhaps I would encounter another brave, loyal soul like Fradel Rurik Korvald, whom I can implicitly trust.” His reflections were just then rudely interrupted by Zonar's roaring laughter, "You? You think you're capable of stopping me?”
After which he knitted his
brows and bellowed at Nevetsecnuac, “Look who is overrating their skill!"
Zonar pivoted away, then swung back again
snorting angrily, "You talk so big, but what makes you think you're still
good enough?"
Zonar’s eyes (with no evidence of prior
injury) completely restored to norm, he now narrowed his eyes and fiendishly warned:
“If you had any sense, you would beg for mercy or flee to safety. But I know your kind all too well. You're so full of foolish notions of honor
and idealism; you’ll never condescend (deign) to a reprehensible recourse (alternative,
options) however reasonable, however sensible. “
“You are too foolhardy to concede
(admit)to the truth, of what lies starkly before you, the evident hopelessness
of your situation. Blinded by faith you
will hasten towards your death; go through hellfire, unflinchingly, wouldn't
you, to achieve your goal?"
Zonar spat out the irate words,
not giving Nevetsecnuac (single) any chance to respond. "This you would do, despite the
overwhelming odds against you, counting on posterity to log (register) your
fame, relying only on Heaven's might to assist you in your righteous
cause. Hah! Foolish martyrs that your kind always are,
you would hasten to your death, never coming to grips with the Universal Truth:
that man stands alone, fights alone, and dies alone, without any interference
or least regard from Heaven. After all,
why should they take any heed in the mundane affairs of insignificant straw
dogs like you? One pitted against
many? Hah! Courage and ability alone, however admirable,
are not nearly enough when confronting a cunning, ruthless, formidable
force. Patience, good planning,
strategy, and proper reinforcements are what are needed here most. And don't think I don't know why you are
headed to the Capital, Channing. “
He shook a reproachful
finger at Nevetsecnuac.
"But I ask you,
without all this that I have enumerated, how do you propose, I mean what makes
you think that you will succeed where others have failed, and failed
miserably? You think that you're
invincible?"
Nevetsecnuac just then was
reminded of the magic brush, which Zonar had earlier gifted him and his had
absentmindedly reached into his inner pocket (to retrieve it); but his hand
failed to find it. It was gone!
“What are you searching
for?” Zonar growled.
Another evidence of a sure discrepancy
in his character. Nevetsecnuac, musing, looked down. Furthermore,
Zonar’s inability to detect his thoughts (read, decipher his mind), confirmed
Nevetsecnuac’s earlier suspicion that this person before him was only an
impostor and a poor impersonator of Zonar at that, though assuredly, he was an
assassin.
Nevetsecnuac sharply looked
up to now say this, when Zonar just then clearly irritated, held up his hand,
keeping any response from Nevetsecnuac. With his darkened countenance, he
simply shook his head and next, scowling, looked away; but then shrugging his
shoulders, he muttered: "Besides, what's the big urgency, eh?"
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05-ZONAR KUNTZU - (17) |
Directing his gaze back at
Nevetsecnuac he asked, "What are a few more years of waiting when twenty
have already passed? Unless” He opened
his eyes wide. "Unless the secret had been revealed to you only recently… Ah, now I understand. It all makes sense."
Zonar nodded his head as
conflicting emotions surged in his chest.
Once he, too, experienced Nevetsecnuac's type of impatience.
When he addressed
Nevetsecnuac anew, his tone lacked the fire and brimstone, the remonstration,
anger, and spite and was, instead, sympathetic and grave.
"Yes I, too, hold
loyalty and filial piety as the duties most paramount to every man. Though I care little for the affairs of your
Country, I respect what you are aiming to achieve.”
“It is because I understand
that I am now prepared to give you, sir, this leeway, this last chance, so that
you may fulfill your life's objective.
All I ask, no, I demand in return is your promise of non-interference. It is imperative that this condition be met
for… then,”
“No, hear me out,
first!" He froze Nevetsecnuac's
response with a gesture of his hand.
"Just take me on my
word when I say that I cannot fail in my duty to my Sovereign Lord for, if I
did, then dire, irreversible consequences would befall my Country. Fact is, we
are forced by circumstance to bid our time; any premature deployment of our
armies will prove disastrous, to say the least." He had absentmindedly murmured this last
phrase to himself as he had looked away then, reverting his piercing gaze back
on Nevetsecnuac, he stressed, "Abide by this condition and I will spare
your life and allow you to be on your way.
Otherwise, sir, I will not be held (accountable) responsible for what I
will then be forced to do, for I have sworn to obliterate all opposition,
however innocent, that stands in my way.
Have I made myself clear?"
"Perfectly…" Nevetsecnuac answered sharply. “But it is
most offensive to me, sir, that you would even consider proposing such an
option to me. More injurious still, you
clearly expected an affirmative response."
His voice rose with his mounting outrage,
"How can I sacrifice the lives of those whom I'm sworn to protect? How can I stand idly by and let you live to
cause injury to Lord Asger Zhon, to my innocent son and daughter, and to let
you abduct my wife and cast her into a fate far worse than death? I will fight you, fight to the end of Earth
if needs be, to prevent this from ever happening!"
"You sorely disappoint
me, young man." Zonar's thunderous, reproachful voice interrupted
Nevetsecnuac. "Just whom do you
bear your allegiance to? Answer me this;
what has been your prime objective all along, if not to avenge your
forefathers? For assured success, you
should have hardened your heart. Are you
willing to risk it all for the sake of a mere woman, and an old man, and puny
children? Mark my words, this weakness
will be your undoing."
"I'll be risking
nothing since I do not intend to lose to you or any other. Hence, your ominous prediction, sir, is
unwarranted and farfetched."
Nevetsecnuac, though perplexed, retorted angrily.
"I thought I
understood you well, but it seems I have erred." Zonar groaned, gritting
his teeth. Then, shifting his body
impatiently, he scoffed, "I've wasted far too much precious time on you as
it is, more than I cared to."
He was about to launch his
deadly assault on Nevetsecnuac when, forcing restraint on himself, he stayed
his hand and commanded, "Halt! The
Tokiro Code of the Warrior will not permit me to take on an unarmed foe."
Disregarding Nevetsecnuac's
protest, he shot up into the air to land on the crest of the hill, disappearing
shortly after.
"I've had just about
enough of your stalling tactics. I dare
you to fight me now!" Nevetsecnuac shouted after him then, following suit,
launched himself onto the hilltop.
Spotting Zonar in the
distance, he rushed after him to engage him.
Zonar, at first spreading the distance between
them, swiftly delved into, then out of the previously hidden, deep cavern, to
now stand at its gaping mouth with his feet firmly planted wide apart on the
hard ground. With one difference, he was also armed with two sheathed swords,
as he waited in a menacing pose with a scornful smile plastered on his lips,
for Nevetsecnuac to catch up.
When Nevetsecnuac reached
the right proximity, Zonar, shouted, “Catch!”, and in a flash, hurled one of
the swords at him.
Nevetsecnuac, still
running, reached out his hand and grasped the hilt of the sword in mid-air as
it was about to sail by, instantly unsheathing it.
"But what's this?" Nevetsecnuac was taken aback, for this was
not the sword he was expecting to have.
Rather it was Lord Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon’s ancestral sword, the very
one he had entrusted into Fradel Rurik Korvald's care. He could not hide the fleeting horror in his
eyes as he looked up to rivet his fiery, questioning gaze on Zonar. Holding it up, he demanded in a fierce shout,
"How did you come by this?"
The response was a roaring,
earth-shaking laughter after which Zonar gnashed his teeth and confirmed
Nevetsecnuac's worst fear, "Your head will soon be joining that of the man
whose name you have assumed."
"And what possible
danger did he pose to you, you are vile, despicable assassin?"
Nevetsecnuac cursed furiously, his face knotted with rage.
"He was on his way to
join up with Lord Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon, was he not? What difference would
it make, then, where he expired?" Zonar retorted with sarcasm and a
bemused smile as he shrugged his shoulders and scoffed.
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06-NEVETSECNUAC (32) |
"You…You will pay for
this outrage murdering swine!" Nevetsecnuac, in a passionate fury
brandishing his sword, launched his deadliest assault on Zonar.
The opponent swiftly
deflected the blow and, in a twirl, hacked back at Nevetsecnuac.
Nevetsecnuac, rendering
this lethal onslaught ineffective, averted the sword's successive deadly
strikes, then somersaulted into position to thrust the blade into Zonar's side;
only to have Zonar swerve nimbly and miss it by a sliver.
The next instant they were
interlocked in the fiercest, most fatal combat yet, that defied all description
and made their previous clashes seem more like mere child's play.
Zonar proved as good as his
boast and, during subsequent countless rounds, Nevetsecnuac, despite his
competence, suffered severe wounds and serious, deep lacerations to his legs,
arms, chest and face.
In the ensuing twenty or
more bouts of fray, as Nevetsecnuac effectively confronted (tackled) Zonar's
invincible prowess, even though he deflected a multitude of deadly blows,
thrusts and strikes and, with his superb skill and agility, held his own for a
long time, to later succeed in inflicting some serious wounds and slashes on
Zonar, in the end, with his strength slowly ebbing, to his dismay Nevetsecnuac
was forced to concede to the possibility of his probable (foreseeable) defeat.
Suddenly however, the
images of his beloved (his uncle, wife, and children) manifesting in his mind’s
eye, anew regenerated his fortitude and zeal.
Letting go a most fearsome, blood-curdling shout, Nevetsecnuac ducked,
dived then executed his most brilliant, incredible maneuver yet, to in one
lightning sweep of the blade sever (hack) Zonar's head at the neck (collar).
The bloody head, cleared
off the torso, tumbled onto the ground and rolled some ways before being
arrested by a rock.
Nevetsecnuac barely had
time to reflect on his success, however, when, to his amazement and great
horror, he witnessed the decapitated body of Zonar slowly rising from the
ground to advance towards where the bloodied head lay still. The head, meanwhile, quavered then, dislodged
from the ground, simply hurled up and joined with the severed stump.
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07 -ZONAR KUNTZU - 2 (33) |
The head now on the nape and perfectly aligned, the bloody line sizzling and emitting a blue iridescence, subsequently dissolved, fused (bonded, merged) with the body.
Once more a whole being,
Zonar suddenly opened his eyes wide and, turning burrowed his fiery gaze into
Nevetsecnuac.
With a snarl on his lips he
declared, "Fool! You can't kill
me! Don’t you know you can't kill an
immortal?”
“Ha! Ha!
Hah! Your best and only recourse
would have been, is to take a flight… to scram. Now, I'll have your head and,
your soul will be condemned for all eternity rot in Hell!"
Throwing his head back,
Zonar first howled like a wolf, and then with an eerily laugh, launched anew
his murderous assault on (a tad stunned) Nevetsecnuac.
"I'll show you how
even an immortal can be killed!"
Though disheartened for a spell, Nevetsecnuac bravely thwarted each
consecutive blow then shifted to an offensive with more lethal strikes. During
the seemingly eternal, succession (series) of intense, pitched scuffle,
Nevetsecnuac, nevertheless, soon realized that he could not exhaust this
formidable foe even after hundreds more such skirmishes, let alone vanquish
him.
Same could not be said of Nevetsecnuac, for
the incessant fierce combat eventually taking its toll, his stamina ebbed, and
he was once more forced to fight defensively.
In this dire circumstance, before Nevetsecnuac
could further retaliate or utilize his only viable option to flee, Zonar, at
lightning speed wielding three consecutive strikes with his indestructible
sword, dealt Nevetsecnuac’s fate an irreversible, calamitous turn.
The first decisive blow
broke the blade of Lord Asger’s ancestral sword, as if it were a tender twig,
into two halves. The second blow came
from the hilt of Zonar's sword. It struck so hard on Nevetsecnuac's top of the
head that it split-open an inch deep gash in his skull. As Nevetsecnuac fought against
disorientation, excruciating, throbbing pain, the dizzying, whirling, fast
failing vision (eyesight), Zonar, glaring venomously at Nevetsecnuac, in a
third strike, swung his sword wide to... Before Nevetsecnuac could ask, “Could
this be the end?” Whoosh … The raw blade
in an instant severed Nevetsecnuac's head clean through at the nape of his
neck.
(END OF SECTION 6)
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