LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC – THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL – SECTION 4
Dwengzur, continued on with his narration of Zonar’s immortal father’s daring escape from the icy peaks, carrying with him his infant twins; consequently, his ensued (succeeded) disappearance into the mortal realms.
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| 01- THE ICY PEAKS |
“The renegade immortal Chando (Zandar Kuntzu) along with his infant son Zonar and daughter Arnora for a time settled down in a remote, obscure part, at the edge of a border town in Korion; experiencing firsthand, all the intriguing and bizarre characteristics and emotional turmoil, which was so prevalent at the mortal realms.”
“Earth years went by quickly; in
all that time, Zandar had brilliantly (most effectively) concealed his true
essence for well over a decade, during which time, to perfect his disguise, he
had even taken a (also red-haired) mortal female as his nuptial mate and sired (conceiving with
her) two additional offspring, a boy, and a girl.”
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| 02- ZANDAR AND HIS MORTAL WIFE |
“During this period, Zandar’s extraordinary metamorphosis had been so complete that he had remained successfully covert (hidden) until the day of reckoning when he had finally been, hunted down by yours truly and Sthetor, and then, along with his mortal wife and children, properly disposed.”
“But I’m getting well ahead of
myself; anyhow, well before this, and well before Zandar Kuntzu’s demise,
anticipating this outcome, Zandar had entrusted the Immortal toddlers, Zonar
and Arnora, to the care of others. Zandar had competently ensured twin’s
safety, first by choosing an old, frail go-between mortal female who had died
soon afterwards and, by purposefully remaining ignorant of the identities of
the subsequent, two different foster families that were destined to raise his
son and daughter.”
“Every infant Immortal born to
the Karn Race, existed alike a mortal human being, until the age of adulthood
(of about thirty earth years); hence, untraceable in that period. After
maturity, it was of course a different story. Before Zonar and Arnora had been
given-away, as an added protective measure, Zandar Kuntzu had also, astutely
implanted a magical command in the children’s subconscious minds which had
prevented his son and daughter, even after they had reached adulthood, from
ever utilizing their powers. This held true for Arnora but, for inexplicable (mysterious)
reasons, not for Zonar ; nevertheless, Zonar’d remained mortal all the while he
was living in Korion.”
“At the time I’d (Dwengzur) been
assigned to this task of, tracking and disposing of the vermin renegade
Immortal Chando (Zandar Kuntzu) and his Immortal offsprings - to ensure my success, I’d been previously instructed
by the most ancient elder Aegeus, on this taboo knowledge and, given the skill
and the means with which to hunt down and slay another Immortal. To alleviate
your curiosity, I will tell you this much. When an Immortal’s congenital
(inherited) and varied powers are fully restored at maturity, from then on,
every time he used his innate powers, it would leave a subtle subatomic residue
(trace) which could easily then, be picked up by those who knew how.”
“Ironically, it had been those
very incantations (spells) Chando (Zandar) had invoked when Zonar and Arnora
were still a toddler, which had left a faint filtrate (residue), that had then
enabled Sthetor (the one who’d left the
mountain and accompanied me, to render me invaluable guidance) and me, to track the whereabouts of Zandar and to eradicate
(destroy) him and his mortal family. Nevertheless, the success of my assignment
was rendered incomplete by Chando’s prior taken action; hence, Zonar and
Arnora, living incognito (disguised) in well enough distance, survived. My
superior Sthetor was furious and for a very long time, refused to give up the rigorous
search; despite all expended effort, however, Immortal twins remained well hidden
from our radar. What I am about to reveal now, the intriguing course of their
fate, was acquired much later on. First let me state briefly, first the tale of
Anora then Zonar. “
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| 03 a- ANORA |
“Arnora, at young age was abducted by an ardent enemy of her foster father, which in turn smuggled her into Wenjenkun. There, her abductor was of mind to sell her to a brothel, to mitigate his wrath and to get apt retribution (payback, vengeance). On route to the capital however, they were attacked by a well-organized group of bandits. During the scuffle, the abductor and his servants and guards were all slain; meanwhile, the frightened child, pursued by one of the bandits, driven to the precipice off a high jagged cliff and unfortunately loosing her footing, fell into the abysmal void. No one could have survived that fall; hence (as she was presumed to be dead), no further search was conducted.”
“Remarkably, though she was badly
injured, she still lived long enough to be discovered and rescued by Lord
Wutenzar Thuxur Marrog Zhon, during one of his hunting trips. Arnora was nursed
back to good health, but having suffered amnesia, Lord Zhon and his wife Anselma (who happened to be the elder
sister of 7th Prince Shon), who only had one son Asger, and could
not have another because of her Ladyship difficult birth, adapted her to be
their second child and she was given a new name Ingrit.”
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| 04- INGRIT (AT 17) 2 |
“Ingrit grew up to be an enchanting beauty and at the age of seventeen, caught the eye of His Highness The 7th Prince- Shon Alric Therran Valamir. As it were, after the death of his beloved wife, Prince Shon had remained single and grief-stricken for well over five years. “Now smitten anew with new love, despite the age difference the two, only after only six months of courtship, were duly married. I believe they had a baby boy born to them shortly thereafter; and I think the offspring’s name was Nevetsecnuac.”
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| INGRIT (ANORA) AND 7TH PRINCE SHON ALRIC THERRAN VALAMIR (32) |
This revelation had shocked Fradel (Nevetsecnuac) to the core; nevertheless, he had competently and most remarkably masked this from Dwengzur. The oblivious immortal, therefore, had nonstop (ceaseless) continued with his narration. “The funny thing, the spell that Zandar Kuntzu had placed on her had remained intact in all that time, and so she never knew of her inherent powers, that could have actually saved her and so many others.”
“But I am getting way ahead of
myself. Now let me tell you bit about
the more interesting life of the twin male offspring of Zandar Kuntzu, Zonar: His early childhood spent in Korion, was relatively
uneventful at first. Zonar, growing up as he did, as a mere mortal boy with
three elder siblings and under the loving, tender care of his foster parents, his
childhood I venture to guess, had been rather a happy one. His adolescence
years (puberty, teenage years) however, contrastingly was rocked by turbulent
and harsh circumstances. He suffered, like so many others had, result of
Zakhertan Yozdek’s violent and viciously brutal, unremitting, vengeful campaigns
against Korion. And after witnessing the gruesome deaths of his foster parents
and his three mortal siblings, Zonar swore, at that early age of thirteen, to
avenge the wrong done to his family and Country. Filled with human patriotism,
he, lying about his age, enlisted in the clandestine army of the King of
Korion, and then rapidly rose to, the rank of a General.”
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| 06- ZONAR AS TEENAGER |
“At the time I was left on my own to hunt for Zonar, as Aegeus had ordered Sthetor, pronto, back to the mountain. Years later and fortuitously for me, the protective spell that had all that time concealed Zonar’s whereabouts, for an inexplicable (enigmatic) reason, was suddenly lifted the instant Zonar set foot in Wenjenkun. Subsequently of course, the rest of his innate special powers gradually manifested (re-emerged), along with vague recollections about his Immortal mother and father. Self-taught, each time he (utilized) implemented those powers, including those encounters with you Fradel Rurik Korvald (Nevetsecnuac), he had unknowingly however, had left behind a traceable imprint, which then, easily got picked up by yours truly. Accurately predicting Zonar’s latest aim and so, strategically well in advance positioned in Channing, with due persistence and implanted suggestions, I had even convinced Zakhertan Yozdek to leave the handling of the matter entirely to me. Moreover, armed with certain knowledge Zonar had lacked, from this vantage point (advantageous position) when Zonar had little or no means of escape, I was finally able to confront him and rid the world of this blight.”
According to Dwengzur, with the
elimination of Zonar, now all was set right in the world. Zonar deemed culpable
(guilty) for violating their most sacred rules, his attempting to change the
destiny of the mortal world, had righteously afforded Dwengzur, the moral
justification to end Zonar’s existence. In his admission to Fradel
(Nevetsecnuac), Dwengzur had used this reasoning, for his protracted enjoyment
concerning the chase and his gloat over its successful conclusion, terming it,
“the roach had been squashed (under my foot) and its hollow (corpse) shell so
fittingly, burned to a crisp.”
But Dwengzur's cold-blooded
recounting of Zonar's (the once mighty warrior’s) death had instead, both
grieved and infuriated Nevetsecnuac. The image of that wretched, scorched
corpse hanging from the gibbet in the Square, even before Nevetsecnuac had learning
that it was his uncle, had all along persisted in haunting Fradel’s
(Nevetsecnuac’s) thoughts; to have Dwengzur now show no remorse, instead, to
wallow in self-satisfaction, made Nevetsecnuac, livid.
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| 07 - FRADEL (NEVETSECNUAC) GOADS DWENGZUR |
Nevetsecnuac with his iron-will nevertheless, contained his bursting retort and furthermore, composed his thoughts into a series of random images to trick Dwengzur into revealing, at least in part, the events of that singular combat between the two Immortals. Using the Immortal’s prejudices against humans, Nevetsecnuac hence, played him.
Dwengzur had felt especially wily
(clever) portraying the scene in such a dramatic fashion, to draw Fradel’s
intense interest; but the scholar not only did not respond in anticipated
fashion, but he had furthermore, yawned, affronting Dwengzur’s bloated pride.
Dwengzur tricked by Fradel’s
(Nevetsecnuac”s) pitched bait (angled lure), rose impatiently and growled: "Here, I'll show you exactly what had
happened so your feeble mind can comprehend (grasp) the true wonder of
it."
(END
OF SECTION 4)
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