LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL - SECTION 22
Zonar was about to take his leave when he just then having picked up Nevetsecnuac’s subsequent thoughts, for a brief spell inquisitively stared at his nephew.
“How very perceptive
of you. You are indeed an astute nephew.”
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| 01-ZONAR - IMMORTAL (46)JP |
It so happened that ever since the Prime Minister's party
where which Nevetsecnuac had encountered the alien Cassar, Samnuk, though this
part of his memories had been erased, he still had the enigmatically
foreboding, gnawing feeling in the pit of his stomach. The unease had stemmed
from the fragmented, cryptic, and disjointed images that had oftentimes
intruded into his mind's eye, which he had never been able to rightly resolve
or decipher. Until just now that is- when from an inadvertent, illogical notion
(a thought deviation), it had all come together to make a coherent deduction
(sense, conclusion).
Nevetsecnuac had understood then that, once a link had been
established between the entity in the amulet (that was an alien rock spirit
imprisoned in a watery grave) and the host- it held an eternal and vital
importance to, in this case Zonar's, existence. Overall, the amulet and the
single creature within was indestructible; and it could always be retrieved.
This realization generated within Nevetsecnuac the keen sense of relief and the
need to repay at least in some small measure, Zonar’s kindness to him, by
communicating this insight to Zonar, before his arch-nemesis Dwengzur, got hold
of the amulet.
Before Nevetsecnuac could verbalize his thoughts, however,
Zonar knowingly just then had smiled and held up his hand. "There's no
need to caution me; however, I do appreciate your bother." He grinned as
his hand unwittingly clutched the hidden bulk (at chest level) under his
chemise (blouse, top).
“I have already retrieved it. “
What Zonar, pressed for time, had opted at this point not to
disclose to Nevetsecnuac however, was the fact that this amulet which held
within it a seditious Cassar creature, this one originally called Mokak, had
once belonged to his father Zandar (Chandor) Kuntzu. A rush of historical facts, all the same,
intruding into his brain, Zonar pensively looked away:
In primordial times Cassars, species that were innately, by
nature supercilious (haughty), odious (vile), and oftentimes ruthless (brutal,
savage), had once been the catalyst of the catastrophic dissention (discord)
among existing ancient races.
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| 02- A WARRIOR CASSARS |
These primordial races, set against one another, the once supreme elite powers warring over several millennia had all consequently one by one had been eradicated (purged and extinguished). After another two millennia the Cassars, result of a long-drawn-out war, fortunately had been finally and utterly (rooted out) defeated by the omnipotent (invincible) Race of Karn. As sole remaining custodians of this world, by consensus of the elders of Karn, they had spared (the few remaining) Cassars from total annihilation only to imprison them, meanwhile allowing the mortal species to have the sole dominion over Earth. Since that time spanning several centuries now race of Karn, had secretly coexisted with men, dwelling in the remotest, highest elevation of the icy peaks- all the while, affording humankind that certain measure of safety, as the few mutated Cassars - (the resilient ones that had later, due to the conditions of their incarceration had evolved into entirely different form, which Samnuk and Mokak were of) - had been indefinitely imprisoned in the protective water crystal amulets.
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| 03- MUTATED CASSARS ( MOKAK IS ONE, LATER NAMED JEKOR) |
These amulets
presently worn only by the elite members of the Karn Race had always been
considered a bane to be endured till the end of time; because each Karn from
since then had incessantly perceived (was aware of) that specific creature’s
every sensation, discernment, impressions, shrewdness, and experiences, most of
it abhorrently vile!
On rare occasions, when an immortal for some reason or other
ceased to exist (died), his amulet was then transferred to another suitable
candidate. When Mokak became available, the most Ancient one Aegeus had
bestowed the amulet containing Mokak to Chandor, at his third birthday’ special
ceremony. And so, Mokak from hence had
been Chandor’s ward, till the date of Chandor’s (renegade immortal Zandar
Kuntzu’s) untimely demise in the mortal realm.
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| 04-ZANDAR (CHANDOR) KUNTZU - IMMORTAL (2)jp |
Cassars had always been endowed (gifted) with supernatural
prowess, but Mokak, (later re-named Jekor by Zonar, Zandar Kuntzu’s twin son)
being an anomaly, with a split personality, being also a clairvoyant and an
adept shape shifter, was an additionally challenging, most troublesome bane
that, Zonar like his father Chandor
before him had to, most of his
adult life, endure. A small consolation,
at least Zonar had not been burdened with this menace during his youth; for as
toddler Zonar had been secreted away and spent his early childhood years under
the diligent care and tutelage of human foster parents, flourishing as a
well-loved, robust, brilliant mortal being.
Zonar’s contented existence, however, had abruptly ceased (ended,
altered the moment Chandar had died)- as he had been then inexplicably drawn to
this, albeit temporarily, liberated alien form.
At distant locale, the Cassar Mokak being quite resourceful,
upon the sudden demise of (Zonar’s father) Zandar Kuntzu, had successfully
affected its escape from his liquid captivity and thence, was let loose in the
mortal realm.
Consequently, Zonar’s mundane human existence from that
moment on had had a catastrophic, tumultuous modification: for his prior
placid, methodical (organized) mind had incessantly since then warred with his
body. Any lesser being had gone utterly insane by such onslaught. Zonar,
harangued by the inexorable physical ailments, sporadic pain, perpetual
nightmares and physic torment, had been eventually driven to seek out (search
for) and uncover the truth about his true lineage and worst still, discover the
existence of the imperative (indispensable) birthright bond, the eternal,
crucible (tribulation) link with Mokak. This was because Zonar and Zandar,
father and son, had shared the same key genes (chromosomes); subsequently,
Zonar had been forced to steadfastly hunt (retrieve) Mokak, to enslave him and
to regain his prior sanity (control of his brain) and his physical wellbeing.
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| 05-MOKAK AND HIS ALTER EGO |
Pursued doggedly by Zonar the adroit Mokak, to avoid capture
and to gain substance and therefore be imperceptible to detection, had striven
hard to blend, in other words copulate, with a mortal living being. After
several unsuccessful tries, where which Mokak’d left behind several charred
human remains and a range of mammal corpses, he had eventually attained through
the process of elimination, the essential specifics to triumph. Primarily, it
had to be an adult female, still virgin, with the rare blood type (AB-).
Secondly, the mortal concept of love, the kind of ardor which human couples had
often exhibited for one another, had to exist at the time of consensual union;
the absence of any of these key ingredients would absolutely doom the procedure
(experiment, the modus operandi).
By quark of fate,
while hiding away at the furthest Province of Wenjenkun’s inhospitable, remote
mountain, Mokak had encountered Jiense (Princess Teuquob and later still,
Prince Nevetsecnuac’s wife) during her flight from danger. (To learn more:
peruse, BOOK 2-THE ORDEAL- SECTION 8 or earlier sections).
After the alien creature’s stealthy scrutiny, finding Jiense
a perfectly compatible candidate from then on Mokak, had set his sights onto
seducing her and achieving his goal. To disarm Jiense’s fears, he’d right away
quickly assumed the appearance of a rather pleasant looking, bold headed, clean
shaven young man about her age; then manifesting suddenly before her, Mokak had
presented himself to her as one supposedly from an aristocratic family from
Kontu that had fallen on hard times and then become a devout Monk who
presently, was on a religious pilgrimage.
Mokak could have done
an irrevocable harm to Jiense (Princess Teuquob) and to his (Zonar’s) nephew,
Prince Nevetsecnuac, as well, permanently altered Wenjenkun’s history.
Fortunately, and just in time too, Mokak (re-named Jekor ) had been traced,
captured, and then duly contained in an amulet which at present, was worn by
Zonar.
Zonar grimaced and considering the alternative loath outcome,
pensively looked away:
If Dwengzur had obtained Jekor, the genetic markers of
the creature within the amulet, if tampered with, would have only resulted in
the destruction of the alien creature and that abrupt severing of ties, could
have had its own serious repercussions. Even if Dwengzur did not do this but had
kept it for a while, for malice, to simply torment him (Zonar) and destabilize
him, the outcome still would have been devastating. This narrow escape, hence,
peeved Zonar.
Zonar’s thoughts reverting to Nevetsecnuac’s bizarre ordeal
with another troublesome Cassar, Samnuk,
which happened to be Dwengzur’s ward, Zonar
could not resist the temptation (chance) to provoke (antagonize) the haughty
Elders of Karn and specifically Dwengzur, addressing him directly:
“I was there you know, witnessing Samnuk’s defiant acts; I
was the innocuous fly at the tip of the nose of one of the spellbound, frozen
human participants (guests). I saw it all. I heard it all.” Zonar staring
across, at the far corner of the room, had roguishly derided (taunted).
Subsequently, he snickered, sensing his goading had generated (produced)
rampant venomous thoughts teleported to him, as it had simultaneously thawed a
degree of the immortals’ icy blood.
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| 06- SOME ELDERS OF KARN (LOOKING DISPLEASED) |
Zonar nevertheless quickly suppressed his present glee
(delight); then, he turned his serious but affectionate gaze back on
Nevetsecnuac.
“Yes, one might say you fared well
in that terrible altercation. You, a supposed primitive human, have taught them
a fine lesson they soon will not forget; furthermore, they will not be so quick
to underestimate your kind in future.”
"They… Who are …?"
Nevetsecnuac was puzzled.
“The unwarranted and outmoded eavesdroppers….” Zonar
disdainfully snorted and looked away, and then turning impatiently added,
“Extrapolating your prior concern, let us just say I had a hunch, so I went
back for it. After all, it was a keepsake from my father.”
“Now I must bid you my fond
farewell." Zonar turned to go but
then stayed (halted) his footing and ceased mid-way his mumbled incantation;
after a brief consideration, he simply shrugged.
"Oh, why not; I can see no good reason why you should
be kept in the dark."
Despite the looming danger Zonar lingered just a little
while longer at the spot to bestow on his nephew, Nevetsecnuac, a fine parting
gift.
Subsequently, with a wave of his hand, Zonar created a
circular opening in the mid-air of the room- a window of sorts. His face
temporarily sported a strange, acerbic expression as his disdainful eyes
taunted and then threatened the far away foe.
To the utter disquiet of some of the Elders of Karn and
concealed fury of Sthetor, Zonar had then invoked, brazenly, the ancient
incantation. When he had reached the last part of the incantation, however,
"Do-kume...ke..ki...
sooonures do …
mukenoro qu wuuuos…. Hukoressyonner….”
"Kazuuuummm… “
Zonar had then deliberately added an unknown variation
(factor, canto, verse) to it. This would enable, Nevetsecnuac to view the unfolding
scene (the live images, the setting and the characters) which had been purposefully
obscured (hidden, muddled, concealed) to the snooping (prying) Immortals.
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| 07-ZONAR - IMMORTAL (37)JP |
Zonar next turned with a softer expression to face
Nevetsecnuac and, graciously invited him to once more experience and view the
mountain cabin of his youth.
The scene presented a typical night-time routine after a
hard day’s toil; the occupants of the dwelling having concluded a hearty
(nourishing) repast and cleared away the dishes from the table, they had now,
before going to bed, few hours' time with which to indulge in their leisure
pursuits. Nevetsecnuac's eyes presently
beheld the typical warm and comforting sight in that far away Mountain Cabin, a
place that had been for two decades, his home. The rush of countless exciting
recollections and loving memories of those times had, all at once then, (with a
warm glow) inundated his heart.
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| 08- LORD ASGER THUXUR MARROG ZHON (162)jp |
Through misty eyes Nevetsecnuac now observed how perfectly
still Lord Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon, having aged a little more, was seated in a
familiar pose by the fire. How characteristically, in rapped attention he read
those old manuscripts, one a night, pausing only periodically, to deliberate on
a concern and at the same time inhaled a prolonged (drawn out) intake of smoke
from his pipe.
Nevetsecnuac’s eyes had next trailed to his beloved wife
Teuquob, seated with composure, in proximity to the warming fire. As beautiful
as ever, she was diligently practicing calligraphy at her desk. Her skill had much improved, far surpassing
his!
Nevetsecnuac looking over her shoulder unseen and unheard,
marveled at her penmanship and the proficiency of the ink strokes as they
effortlessly glided on the (paper) parchment. As though sensing his presence,
she abruptly stopped, exhaled a deep sigh and then withdrew the string of wound
threads he’d long ago after one of their long walks, had given to her when she
had casually asked what he had been doing? He had felt nervous during their
conversation and so used his hands to focus on something else. He could not
believe that after all that time she still held onto it, that she treasured
something so trivial and looked at it now with such longing in her pupils.
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| 09-NEVET'S WIFE TEKOUBJIN (70 B )JP |
He fought the sudden desire rising within him, wanting to
embrace her, to stroke her auburn locks; to reach out and tuck the stray loose
hair behind her ear. Oh, how he longed to gently caress her cheeks and then
ever so reverently kiss the tip of her nose, which always made her smile, kiss
her forehead and those luscious lips.
His soul and heart
were now filled with melancholy, for he loved and missed her so terribly; his
present existence contrastingly, had been so driven, austere, and devoid of
such candor, tenderness, and tranquility. Moreover, he suspected deep down that
he would never ever again be with her or with them.
A sorrowful sigh escaped him as his focus (gaze) lastly
settled on his beloved, a little bit older, and now not so identical twins. His
precious, robust (strong, healthy, and hardy in constitution) boy twin Alric
Svein and darling, most precious girl twin Lueling, as they with wonder glint
in their eyes observed (studied) everything and all, about them as they played.
Only the child’s vastly rich imagination could flourish
(enabled) and hold such wonders as twins remained deeply absorbed, intensely
captivated by some imaginary yet ordinary item (object): perhaps a specter, a
crawling bug, a bird, a simply fallen log, a crackling flame, or a discarded, a
plainly innocuous toy.
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| 10- THE TWINS , BOY ALRIC SVEIN AND PRECIOUS GIRL TWIN LUELING. |
Nevetsecnuac’s heart was again wrenched with melancholy
anticipating the many dangers and hardships that awaited them, even though Lord
Asger would do his utmost to shield them from it all.
“You are being way too morbid.”
Zonar’s testy, stern words snapped Nevetsecnuac from his ominous reflections.
"You should instead rejoice in your heart that you have
such striking and gifted twins, perfectly well behaved too; funny how the boy
is the spitting image of you, whereas the little girl now resembles more and
more your astonishingly beautiful wife Princes,
Teuquob.” Zonar softening, grinned
mischievously as though entertaining a secret; but
~
one he was not willing to divulge,
not at this moment in time. “Imagine if Lueling had instead, looked like you.”
Nevetsecnuac remained quite unresponsive to Zonar’s purposeful banter
however, as he could not tear his eyes from the scene. He watched as though
obsessed, oblivious of the tears filling his eyes.
The fearful emotions,
of trepidation about their prospects, once more welling up in his heart,
Nevetsecnuac broke away from the scene by a sheer act of will and turned to ask
Zonar if he could enlighten him on their probable futures, but the renegade
Immortal had already gone, vanished into thin air, without a sound or a trace
some time ago.
Disappointed,
Nevetsecnuac (spun his head back) turned to look again at the scene in mid-air,
but the window that beheld his beloveds’ images, too, had also disappeared as
if it had never existed. Suddenly the light was gone as well, and pitch
darkness once more had blanketed (permeated) the room.
His emotions, meanwhile, erupting akin to the cyclone winds
(or, charged akin to lightning bolts); Nevetsecnuac simply collapsed in the
chair by the bed and closed his eyes tightly for some time, to beget
(tranquility) serenity, in that thought-filled silence.
“Am I crying?”
Only then had he become aware of the copious number of hot
tears streaming down from his cheeks and chin; the cascading flow subsequently,
progressively, drenching (soaking) the upper part of his silk night garment
(pajamas, clothes).
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(END OF SECTION 22)
(CONCLUSION OF THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL- STAY TUNED FOR BOOK 11- THE EVIL PERSONIFIED)
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