LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 9
After two- and one-half days of riding, the stony, dirt path converged with the old main road that had long ago been supplanted by another, wider and more level one.
This other
thoroughfare (artery) cut straight through the bustling towns and thriving
villages that had seemingly sprung up almost overnight beside it.
Striving to compensate for lost time, and
since the opportunity of a long, uninterrupted stretch up ahead availed itself,
Nevetsecnuac spurred his mount into a full gallop and they rode like the wind
all day long, the mare's hooves barely skimming the surface of the road. Only when dusk fell did they stop for rest
and nourishment. Leaving the road at a
suitable spot, Nevetsecnuac was about to dismount when his keen eyes suddenly
spotted a thin trail of coiling smoke to the west, beyond a nearby hill.
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01- NEVETSECNUAC |
“Could it be Zonar? No.” Nevetsecnuac shook his head, grimacing wryly. That's hardly his style.
“Perhaps it’s bandits…
Well, there's only one way to find out.” He nodded, having already decided to
reconnoiter and find its source. After
tethering his mount to the largest tree in a secure spot that offered lush,
green grass for grazing, Nevetsecnuac swiftly crested the hill and, advancing
stealthily, made a beeline for the activity.
He ducked just in
time, spotting two armed sentinels off to the side, beyond the second
rise. Deciding to investigate them
first, he changed course and, hugging the ground, crept swiftly but quietly
towards them.
When he was still
some distance away, however, the ground beneath his feet suddenly gave way and
he plunged into a deep, dark hole.
Despite the howling winds, the more alert sentinel at once stood up
erect, throwing aside the dried meat he was disdainfully chewing. With his right hand poised at his sword's
hilt he turned and looked intently, directly at where Nevetsecnuac had been
trapped.
"What is it,
Deizvor?" Nevetsecnuac heard a winded voice demanding as he hastened after
the other who was fast approaching where Nevetsecnuac was.
"I thought I
heard some noise coming from this direction, Jonnath," Deizvor answered
brashly.
Nevetsecnuac had
not let out even a whimper in his surprise fall. Lying on his back, slightly winded, listening
to the warnings from his sixth sense, he remained perfectly still and
considered his options. The approaching
footsteps were now sounding dangerously close.
"You must be
out of your mind. How can you hear
anything in this wind? Come on, be
reasonable." Jonnath, grasping the
other's arm, held him back only a few paces from the edge of the hole.
"We should get
back quick." he then warned.
"We've left the post unguarded.
We'll be in a terrible fix if our absence is noted."
"I did hear
something suspicious, like someone falling in, almost like a cave-in."
Deizvor responded indignantly, angered by the other's skepticism.
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02 THE SENTRY - JONATH AND DEIZVOR |
"Anyhow, no one asked you to tag along. Go back if you're so worried about your hide; as if he's going to show up now; if at all!" Deizvor barked, "I said get back! I'll be there summarily, after I first make a cursory inspection of this area."
"Why are you
always so brash, so quick to fly off the handle? I'm just as bored as you, but you can't
invent trouble where there is none. What
you heard was, in all probability, some scared scavenging mammal or a rodent
fleeing to safety." Jonnath stood
his ground.
"Besides, must I warn you of the
prevalent dangers? Do you wish to fall
into one of the pitfalls that abound here?
It’s precarious enough to scour this ground in daylight, let alone at
night. Our duty lies strictly in
watching the road and guarding Cyprecox Pass, nothing else." Seeing this failed to persuade Deizvor, he
turned his back to him in exasperation, "Go ahead then! Have it your way." Jonnath’s voice trailed into the distance.
"I have this
strong hunch." Deizvor stamped his foot, vacillating.
"I know I'm on
the verge of something. I sense it with
every fiber of my being. Hmm, oh
well. Jonnath’s probably right. I am bored out of my skull, but I would have
welcomed an encounter with a predatory beast, even a ghost or goblin. Anything, anything is better than this
interminable waiting." Still
grumbling, Deizvor reluctantly withdrew from the edge of the pit and followed
Jonnath’s footsteps into the distance.
“They're gone at last! “Sitting bolt upright, Nevetsecnuac brushed
aside the slimy worms and maggots that had, all this while, crawled over his
face, through his hair and on his chest and legs.
Straining his eyes to see in the scant light,
he glanced around him. “Is this construction man-made?” Evidently it was, for the ground on which he
sat was tamped hard. Rocks and pieces of
broken pottery protruded from the soil and pieces of rotted beams with sharp
edges and spikes littered the ground.
Testifying to the depth of the hole, the air was suffocating, dense and
smelled nauseatingly foul.
By rights, his fall
should have been more detrimental but, using his martial training, Nevetsecnuac
had broken the impact of the fall and had escaped serious injury. Rising to his feet, he reached out his hands
and began to carefully poke and pry the jutting sides.
Some insects, crawling slimy worms and hairy
bugs scuttled away from his probing hands.
Oddly, his hands detected a corroded metal jug that deposited a
strangely familiar smell on his fingers, which he, identifying it, immediately
wiped it off onto his trouser cuff.
Then as he continued with his probing, what he
had dreaded most came true; for his hand just then rested abruptly on a group
of human skulls and bones clustered in the far corner.
“This was clearly not a burial plot, which meant that these
unfortunate souls, judging from the way the bones were arrayed and other
pertinent clues, were buried alive and left here to suffer a prolonged,
lingering death. What kind of crime had
they committed that warranted this cruel punishment? Had they succumbed to treachery? Were they loyalists? Stripped
of all clothing and other personal belongings, the mystery surrounding their
death and their identification would remain unresolved indefinitely.”
More intriguing
still, was the discovery a bit later, of a solitary skeleton crouched in a
small hollow across from the main group.
This one had parts of his legs missing and, upon scrutiny, Nevetsecnuac
found that the shin bone had been severed sharply at the ankle and, worse
still, that the bones of the hand had been crushed so severely that they
crumbled to dust at the merest touch.
Nevetsecnuac's face
creased into a frown of intense concentration.
“Why had this one been so brutally
mutilated? Why had he suffered so much
worse? Oh, if only the dead could
speak!”
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03- NEVETS IN THE DARK PIT |
No sooner had this wistful thought crossed his mind than, suddenly, the corpse's jaw broke off and from inside the cavity a strange, cold object fell squarely into Nevetsecnuac's palm. A bit spooked, Nevetsecnuac examined it with care. It felt like a jewel laden miniature key of some sort.
“All right,” Nevetsecnuac nodded, “if
it’s within my power, I'll certainly do all I can to vindicate you, sir.” He placed the key into his inner pocket for
safekeeping then, mindful of the limited time he had in which to free himself,
returned his attention to more immediate concerns.
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(END OF SECTION 9)