LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC- ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 17
The ensuing days and nights the relentless journey passed in much the same way: during daylight hours riding as hard as the mare's endurance would allow it and, stopping briefly at nightfall, in some secluded safe spot (away from the main highway), to allow the animal to recoup part of her spent strength.
Eventually on the fifth
day, the road ahead merged with the new major trading route that accordingly
(according to general hearsay), would be winding its way alongside the river
leading to, at some point, to the bustling trading post.
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01- NEVETSECNUAC |
When at dusk, Nevetsecnuac’s sharp eyes spotted the beginnings of habitation in yonder (in the far distance); he halted the mare’s gallop and paused briefly to ponder whether it was time for him now to revert to his scholarly disguise.
Concluding in the end that assuming Fradel
Rurik Korvald's identity was more appropriate, despite the traps that may lie-
in- wait on the road ahead, Nevetsecnuac steered the horse away from the road
and, in a perfectly (hidden) secluded spot, clad himself once more in the
poet's finery.
Just as he was about to
discard the (bundled up) hunting clothes into a deep crevice, his eyes suddenly
caught the jutting head of the miniature key, previously given to him in the
pit by the tortured skeleton.
Pulling it out, he
examined the item more intently (carefully) in daylight, before returning it to
his inner pocket and resuming his journey.
Along the way Nevetsecnuac
cogitated (deliberated) on how the metal of the miniature key had been sturdy
and, strangely, shared certain similar properties, same texture, sheen, and
resiliency, with the sword Zonar, at the start of their combat, had given him
(furnished him with) for his use.
Nevetsecnuac further
mulled over (nominated) on, those precious small jewels all inset (inlaid) into
the stem and around three cursive pictographs, a rare feat, so ingeniously
crafted (worked) into the metal.
His focus suddenly
straying (drifting), “Zonar?" he abruptly queried.
"Your presence has
been sorely missed. When and where, I
wonder, will our next destined encounter be?" His lone cry, left unchallenged, resounded in
the thin air, losing itself in the whisper of the wind rippling through the
hills.
“Indeed, in a strange way he’d missed his most
formidable adversary.”
Nevetsecnuac’s thoughts
veered, this time, to his recent hallucination and he questioned yet again
whether it was a premonition of the future after all.
“Would the
invincible warrior Zonar, really bring about my premature doom?”
An inexplicable shudder
passed through Nevetsecnuac just then, as the cryptic, cold hand of Death
tapped his shoulder. Despite it all,
however, he still felt an absence of malice or disdain towards Zonar.
“Perhaps
that is where my own weakness lies?”
When rider and mount
halted for a brief respite, Nevetsecnuac’s attention reverting on the miniature
key, he pulled it out and studied those three cursive pictographs that had been
worked into the metal.
They were unlike any he had seen or studied.
Unable to decipher their
meaning, he decided to postpone solving it till later and quickly secured the
key back this time, in his luggage. He
then in one fluid motion mounted the horse and in keeping with the pretense of
Fradel Rurik Korvald, picked up the reins in the fastidious manner of a casual
rider rather than his usual, expert grip.
Carrying the ornate crop
that fashionable scholars used, he quickly spurred the horse back onto the
road. This time, however, he kept the
horse's speed more moderate and, in keeping with the disguise, he allowed his
rudiment traits (mannerisms, characteristics) merge in conformity with Fradel
Rurik Korval’s.
Be that as it may, a
sudden query (inquiry) prayed on Nevetsecnuac mind, a deep concern on how his
sworn brother was faring in his own journey towards the mountain home where
Lord Asger Thuxur Marrog Zhon and Teuquob awaited.
Nevetsecnuac understood
that once Fradel had appraised them of the current political situation, so
vastly different from the fictitious one by Heng Erling, and consequently, the
amended goal; they would be despondent, comprehending (grasping) that he (Nevetsecnuac)
would, forever be lost to them.
Unbidden, Nevetsecnuac shed a silent tear, his
soul now torn at their imagined, inevitable, inconsolable grief. A Gut-wrenching sadness gripped his heart
further, knowing he would miss out on seeing (his identical twins,) his son
Alric Svein (boy) and daughter Lueling (girl),
grow up.
~
The journey thus far had
been long and arduous, yet these rigors paled in comparison to the impending
difficulties that lay ahead. The Capital
Province Holger, with all its rigid rules, regulations and stirring of the
political soup made Nevetsecnuac a bit uneasy at first, but as he had been
preparing for this eventuality all his life, he remained fully confident in
meeting these challenges. And for now,
passing as the esteemed scholar Fradel Rurik Korvald presented the least
problem of all.
Suddenly, Nevetsecnuac was
rudely awakened from his hopeful reverie by the vociferous sounds of gambling,
vigorous gaiety and strident music emanating from a string of inns lining the
road up ahead. The savory smells of
every imaginable kind of dish assailed his nostrils, and he became aware for
the first time that day of his empty stomach.
Reflecting, he realized that he had neglected to eat since the day
before yesterday.
Dusk was falling once
more, and he finally succumbed to the strong yearning within him for a warm
bath and a cooked meal.
Halting the mare in front
of the sixth inn by the side of the road, the most modest and respectable
looking one of the lots, Nevetsecnuac dismounted and handed the horse's reins
to the eager young stable hand. Another
page boy ran up as he dismounted and scooped up the baggage Nevetsecnuac had
already tossed down. Pausing for a
moment Nevetsecnuac watched the stable boy gently handling the horse and leading
the mare to the stables out back, then quickly mounted the marble steps
(stairs) that led up to the posh (well-constructed) ebony door of the Inn, with
the page burdened with the luggage following (trailing) close behind.
Nevetsecnuac was politely
greeted by a dignified, rather young-looking, tall, lean, stern-faced proprietor
seated at the makeshift desk. The original desk, Nevetsecnuac was to learn
later on, had been badly damaged the previous night, casualty of an unprecedented
brawl (fight, scuffle) between the two members of a rival faction, and was taken
away for prompt repairs.
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02- PROPRIETOR KJELD ROSKO |
The proprietor had keen (intense), intelligent eyes, which its scrutiny penetrated deep within one’s soul. Rising to his feet at once, he’d approached the scholar, and with a slight bow of the head had introducing himself as Kjeld Rosko, the humble proprietor of that establishment, then courteously ushered the obviously distinguished scholar (Nevetsecnuac), to a comfortable seat by the makeshift registry desk.
Nevetsecnuac was first
offered a complimentary cup of fragrant tea and asked if he would like some
delectable tartlet to go with it. Before
Nevetsecnuac had a chance to reply, however, a shapely maid had brought in a
tray bearing the steaming pot (of more tea) and some colorful, fluffy pastries.
As Nevetsecnuac politely nodded and reached for the offered cup, the proprietor
Kjeld Rosko, assuming his businesslike persona, steered around the table/desk
and, fetching the elaborately bound registry book from the drawer, he opened it
to a specific page. After picking up the
writing brush from its stand and loading it with ink, his eyes lightly trailed
down the list of names on the parchment page to the last entry.
Smiling, Kjeld Rosko (the
innkeeper) then looked up to pleasantly inquire after his honorable guest's
name, his intended length of stay and his immediate and long-term requirements.
"Tonng Yennik."
Nevetsecnuac, wishing to escape the scrutiny and unwarranted attention that the
name of Fradel Rurik Korvald would attract, without the least change in his
serene, but firm countenance, responded.
As Nevetsecnuac was dictating his other requirements his eye, covertly
turned towards the crowded dining hall, where he caught sight of a singular
stranger, armed with a finely made broadsword under his tailored garments,
taking his evening meal in the company of two stout guards.
The stranger, though
seated in a far corner, cut such an imposing figure that everyone in the hall
was obviously ill at ease with his presence there. A slight look of displeasure, after sampling
(nibbling) one of the morsels, immediately unleashed, a fit of rage and hurling
abuses from the guard on the left, directed at the manager who, in turn,
red-faced, berated the hapless waiter who appeared to be laboring for breath
from fright, but before he could pass out cold, he’d been perfunctorily
dismissed. On a signal from the manager,
the more efficient, seasoned staff burst into the scene to fawn (toady, grovel)
and to serve on the demanding two.
Kjeld Rosko momentarily
distracted by this, his face twitched failing to hide his irritation and
suppressed hostility, but only for a spell; the expression in his blue eyes now
unreadable, he sported (wore) for a time a wry (sardonic) grin, as he followed the
ongoing frenzied activity to appease the
occupants of that table in the dining hall. Subsequently, turning away, he barked at the
page (more like a snap command) to take the guest’s luggage on up to the
available room at once then, hastened to complete his business with scholar
Tonng Yennic.
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03- KJELD ROSKO |
In the midst of all that mayhem, the stranger’s eyes had briefly, with a cold, callous air swept the room, totally disregarding the ruckus (commotion) the guard on his left hand instigated (set off); then, purposefully averting Nevetsecnuac’s gaze, he indifferently resumed his stern conversation with the bearded one on his right.
“Who are you
that you should warrant such fear?” Nevetsecnuac
mused, as he stole an impassive glance at the stranger.
The moment Nevetsecnuac
was anew engaged by the proprietor Kjeld Rosko, however, the stranger reverted
his cold, piercing eyes with a calculating gleam back on Nevetsecnuac to study
him more intently. His obvious
subordinate, the keen bearded companion, becoming aware of this, abruptly fell
silent and turned slightly in the same direction to see Nevetsecnuac then,
reverted (turned) his questioning gaze back on the latter.
Nevetsecnuac, from the
corner of his eye, astutely observed how the bearded one receiving some silent
instructions inclined his head towards the lobby and nodded to some unseen
person.
“Now the trap will be set.” Nevetsecnuac
tad (smidgen), amused, nonchalant, at his leisure rose and followed the
innkeeper and his assistant Rodny (who’s rigid demeanor was more akin to a bodyguard)
up the stairs.
The subtle exchange, Kjeld
Rosko catching the stranger's eye in passing and, giving the other a terse,
obsequious nod, was of course shrewdly noted by Nevetsecnuac. Stifling a
chortle, midway up the stairs he (Nevetsecnuac) turned and halted, boldly looking
back at the stranger, giving him a complete once over.
“Who are you, really,” Nevetsecnuac intrepidly mused.
And when Nevetsecnuac’s
eye caught the dour glower (stern scowl) of the bearded guard, he simply
grimaced wryly and, undaunted, turned to continue following Kjeld Rosko and his
assistant Rodny, to the top of the stairs.
The proprietor Kjeld Rosko
observing scholar’s audacious (risky) demeanor, his face for a spell had turned
ashen, but of course, he had quickly masked his dread and, from then on with a
glint of admiration in his pupils, he’d covertly scrutinized this unusual
scholar, while he hastened his steps towards the assigned room. Finally, at the
end of the long hall Nevetsecnuac was solicitously ushered into an airy,
comfortable room.
“Lavish decorations,” Nevetsecnuac noted after a cursory glance, “far too lavish, in fact.”
A frown appeared on his face, and he shook his
head, "This will not do!"
"But sir, it’s the
best room we have, the most luxurious one at this Inn." Suppressing his
fury, Kjeld Rosko reticently (reservedly, warily) protested. Clearly, he had not anticipated the
objection. His assistant standing
rigidly on the side, looking aghast and tongue-tied, wrung his hands as he
nervously searched his brain for more persuasive words, to assist his boss in
this.
Nevetsecnuac disdainfully
walked past both, to stand before a magnificent tapestry hanging over the far
wall. His stern eyes surveyed the fine
stitching until they pointedly rested on a miniature hole concealed by the
design, and he grimaced coldly.
On the other side the spy
blanched and instinctively recoiled with a jerk, fearing he had been found
out. Then, acknowledging that that was
impossible, he pressed a single eye back to the portal only to meet Nevetsecnuac's
cold stare once more. Excitement and
fear coursed through his veins as he shuddered anew, filled with apprehension.
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04- SPY (FRASTOS) - JP 11 |
Nevetsecnuac, however, smiled sourly and half turned to address the inwardly seething Kjeld Rosko.
"Are you daft or hard
of hearing; I said, this room is unsatisfactory. “He said crossly (irately)
then softening his tone, explained. “For one thing, it’s too drafty," he
shot a glance back at the tapestry, "for another, I prefer the western
exposure. Perhaps I've neglected to
inform you of these particular requirements."
"Please, reexamine
facts sir and reconsider," Kjeld Rosko clenched his right fist, hidden behind
his back, as his assistant, now tongue-tied, clamoring for an apt excuse. "If I may be candid with you, the rooms
facing west are all occupied. Besides
that, they are all second rate and decidedly draftier." Kjeld said in a placating tone, though he held
his hard gaze on the arrogant scholar, "Won't you reassess? I'll do everything in my power to make your
stay here most pleasant and comfortable.
This is truly our finest room, as befits one of your ‘stature, sir. I assure you that, even if another room
becomes available, it will fall considerably short of the luxury you see
here."
"Look here,"
Nevetsecnuac cut him short with a curt gesture of his hand, "if you don't
have the means to accommodate me as I wish, then I strongly suggest that you
stop wasting my time. Have my horse brought
round at once!" Feigning anger, he
made to leave, pushing past Kjeld Rosko.
"What's all the
commotion about?" The bearded guard
from the dining hall suddenly appeared in the hall.
"Sir, this is a
private matter. Your rude intrusion is
not appreciated." Nevetsecnuac
glared at the guard provocatively.
“What business is this of yours? Get lost!” his stern look plainly said.
Obviously unused to this
kind of treatment, the guard looked sharply at Nevetsecnuac, his hand gliding
over to rest threateningly at the hilt of his sheathed sword, and his polite
smile instantly turned into an icy scowl of hatred.
Any other would have been wasted for a mere
cross look, let alone such a rebuke!
“Have you not the slightest idea whom you are
addressing?” his eyes narrowed,
as he glared venomously (furiously), the threat implicit in his silence.
“So,”
Nevetsecnuac mused, “you've had orders
not to molest (assault, abuse, mistreat) me; interesting!”
In keeping with a scholar's arrogance,
Nevetsecnuac was about to haughtily rebuff the restrained bully further, when
Kjeld Rosko, with unusual agility, rushed past Tonng Yennik (Nevetsecnuac).
Eyes hard with steel
determination, the resilient (tough and flexible) proprietor, nevertheless, bowed
low to the guard.
"I apologize
profusely, sir, for your trouble. I
apologize to you both." Kjeld Rosko
turned and bowed low also, to Tonng Yennik.
Despite his outward show of submission, he quaked in rage, inwardly.
Nevetsecnuac was secretly impressed with Kjeld Rosko’s admirable stoical (tolerant,
forbearing) nature.
"It’s just a slight
misunderstanding, that's all."
Shifting his sham (pretend), nervous gaze back and forth between the
guard and Tonng Yennik, he dabbed at the supposed perspiration on his mustache,
with his handkerchief. "The
gentleman wishes to have another room. I
was just about to accommodate his wishes."
“It sounds like you're asking his permission,
innkeeper!” Nevetsecnuac questioningly
looked at Kjeld Rosko.
The guard's face, meanwhile,
had crinkled in momentary disgust as, clenching his fist, he let the built-up
anger drain slowly from him. After a
scornful laugh he averted Tonng Yennik's eyes and gave the briefest of nods.
"I apologize for the
intrusion." Without another word,
he briskly turned and left.
Kjeld Rosko was relieved
that the volatile situation had been averted; after a furtive glance at the
retreating guard, he politely turned to address the scholar: "Please, for
the time being, make yourself comfortable here; I'll go and make all the
specific arrangements at once." Attaining a nod of concurrence from Tonng
Yennik, he exhaled deeply, bowed low once more, then hastily withdrew.
“What dramatics!” Nevetsecnuac shook his head after the proprietor.
“It had not
been his intention to be so hard on Kjeld
Rosko. He was only testing the
waters to see how far they would go to keep him here. But why have they made no contact yet? What were they waiting for?” Nevetsecnuac
had already formed his own opinion on the singular stranger's role in all this
or, at least, who it was that had ordered his accommodation here. Nevetsecnuac had set the wheel in motion,
forced their hands but, until the inevitable meeting which, he was certain,
would transpire later that night, there was little left now for him to do. With a shrug of his shoulders, he strolled to
the far end of the room and stood in front of the window, thoughtfully staring
out at the view. The miniature gardens,
with their man-made mountains and creeks, the snaking pathways bordered by
elaborate lattices seemed to be pure ostentation.
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05-SCHOLAR TONNG YENNICK (NEVETSECNUAC)JPG |
The shallowness of it all rather disgusted him. “Only those who only experienced nature at second hand could find the tiny landscape appealing,” he concluded. He disdainfully pursed his lips then turned away from the window, his mind returning to the stranger and his guards.
“I foiled their immediate plans and forced them into
an alternate course. Next, I'll appear
agreeable, but not too much so. Why
should I make things too easy for them?” His eyes once
more surveyed the room.
“I wonder where the trap door is.” Deducing
(figuring out) the most likely spot, he walked over and tapped lightly, so as
not to alert any guard concealed within.
Satisfied with the result, he turned back and sat down by the fireplace.
Short time later Kjeld
returned somewhat panting (winded, breathless) and with flushed (red) face, for
he had to oversee a lot of details and alter or shift the carefully devised
plans and traps that had been in place for nearly a month. After apologizing profusely to Tonng Yennik
for the inconvenience and the slight delay he declared, with a certain
satisfaction, that the room fitting his precise specifications had now been
made ready for his perusal. Kjeld Rosko then, graciously inclined his head and
invited Tonng Yennik to follow him. As
they were leaving, Kjeld turned and bayed at his underling Rodney, to; at once
move the gentleman's baggage to the “Room Twelve”.
Down the hall, they came
across a disgruntled merchant, hair disheveled and clothes akimbo, being
hastily, unceremoniously deposited into a new room. Too angry, or perhaps too frightened, to
articulate his feelings, he glared furiously at Kjeld Rosko then stole a
scornful glance at Tonng Yennik, before going in and pointedly slamming the
door in their faces as they passed.
Feigning incomprehension,
Nevetsecnuac raised an eyebrow at the innkeeper. The apologetic Kjeld nervously rushed to give
some lame excuse for the merchant's rude behavior, glancing fearfully at the
cracked door to his left as he spoke.
Then, with polite rhetoric (pomposity), he motioned to the room on the
right and, inclining his head slightly, ushered Tonng Yennik into the hastily
prepared Room Twelve.
"Is this room more to
your satisfaction, sir? Does it meet
with your approval?" Kjeld’s deep etched
lines on his face, tell-tale-signs of fret, creased further with impatience as
he, waited for an answer.
"Hmm… It will
do." Nevetsecnuac responded, after a brief perusal. Walking over to the far corner, he sunk into
a comfortable chair by the mantle.
“Odd,” Nevetsecnuac
noted the recently disturbed dust floating in the air; “this room had not been used for some time. It obviously wasn't my needs that dislodged
that merchant.”
Highly pleased and,
showing no inclination to leave Kjeld, meanwhile, had walked up to the tray
bearing a teapot and cups and, turning, graciously offered his guest a seething
cup of fragrant tea. Receiving a negative response, he next, on the pretext of
showing the amenities of the room and how it accorded with his guest's
instructions, prodded Tonng Yennik discreetly, so he thought, for more
information, his background, destination, and the nature of his business in the
Capital.
With a seemingly agreeable
disposition, Nevetsecnuac provided him with only the minimum of harmless
information, just enough to satisfy Kjeld's curiosity. Then, feigning distraction, inquired
pointedly after the stranger with the broadsword whom he had seen earlier in
the dining hall.
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06- FAMOUS BATHOUSE (3)JPG |
The shock, which Kjeld Rosko so miserably failed to mask and, his subsequent, evasive answers, piqued Nevetsecnuac’s curiosity. Nevertheless, for the time being, he decided to simply let it pass.
To Kjeld’s relief just
then, an underling after knocking poked his head in and hastily offered his
apologies for the intrusion; he next, happily announced that the provisions for
the bath had been made ready in the bathing hall.
"A communal
bath," Tonng Yennik, his face showing obvious signs of displeasure,
derisively asked.
"Why, of
course." Kjeld with a profligate grin, explained. "And you’ll be attended by rare,
exquisite beauties of either gender, depending on your preference of course. We
have become quite famous for our bathing facilities here ever since we found
the means to channel the nearby hot springs in an unlimited supply. Sir, you are quite fortunate that you have
come at this time before high Season.
Winter is our busiest time, and nearly all our rooms are reserved far in
advance by gentry from near and far. Oh,
but I'm keeping you from your enjoyment of your bath." Seizing this opportunity, Kjeld Rosko beat a
hasty retreat.
“Yes, hasten forth and report your findings to that
stranger. I'm sure he will be impressed
by the uselessness of your observations,” Nevetsecnuac thought as the Innkeeper departed.
“I’m in need of a bath, “Nevetsecnuac reflected, “but only that and nothing else.”
Before he left the room
however, Nevetsecnuac took the precautionary measure of concealing his identity
papers in a supposed, secure place.
Locking the door after him, he swiftly traversed the long hallway and
descended the stairs, following the painted images of a man in a tub down to
the bathing chamber.
~
(END OF SECTION 17)