LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC – THE RENEGADE IMMORTAL – SECTION 8
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| 001- EYE IN THE SKY |
The thunder and lightning meanwhile had intensified in its fury; abruptly just then a blinding bolt of green glow violently blew asunder the vaulted (domed) ceiling, leaving in its stead, a large gaping hole. This strike was followed by a prompt secondary bolt that came perilously close to scorching and reducing Dwengzur to ashes.
Unexpectedly and abruptly, an eerie stillness enveloped the
room; this mysterious, ominous quiet (silence) persisted for an unspecified
time hovering overhead, akin to bird of prey. Then suddenly, howling winds had
again erupted manifesting tumult of menacing clouds which instantaneously
blanketed the sky. These congregated clouds swirling into a whirlwind,
superficially were then sucked into a central vortex until only one cumulus
billow remained in the ominous sky. In the nucleus of the dark cloud appeared a
single frightful eye, its lid gradually opened and then glared down directly on
Dwengzur.
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| 01-MASTER'S EYE |
"There you are vile creature! What is this? You dare take leave without permission, and then compounding your offence, assume my form (my image) and run amok!" The angry roar shook the Heavens.
Imposter Dwengzur swallowed dryly and, trembling in fear, at
once reverted to his ephemeral (transient, temporary) shape and quivering still
with a shaky whimper, implored his master for forgiveness for his impropriety. Precipitously next, he stated his version of
events, too swiftly for Nevetsecnuac's mortal ears to discern the words.
Newetsecnuac, temporarily overlooked, standing on the sideline,
gazed at this intriguing (fascinating) creature before him, almost mesmerized
by his remarkable alien form, which resembled an intangible, naked pseudo male
being, with pale white hue, ethereal (wraithlike), with round, lidless (wide
open) black orbs for eyes and unnaturally elongated, thin limbs.
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| 02- CREATURE |
"Nonsense!" the voice, from the sky, meanwhile, had boomed, drawing Nevetsecnuac’s attention back to the clouds. "Wretched fool! I already know all that I need."
Imposter Dwengzur, trembling though unrelenting, now switched
to a strange incomprehensible vernacular (dialect, language) and once more
pleaded his case at incredible speed.
"Your reasons are unacceptable. You have gone too far;
hence, your crime is unpardonable!" The voice, unmoved, devoid of any
mercy, roared.
“You need a good lesson; brace yourself, for this time I shall
not spare you the severity of it!” The voice (rising in crescendo,) had again thundered,
causing a serious seismic tremble, that reached the infinite depths of the earth
under Nevetsecnuac’s feet; Nevetsecnuac nevertheless, maintained his balance
and stood firm. What happened next was unbelievable!
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| 03- MASTER'S WRATH -LIGHTENING RODS |
Subsequently, the most powerful lightning bolts split the air, scorching, and creating deep craters (fissure, cleft), where the creature prior stood or moved to thereafter. In his present form however the alien being had efficiently dodged these series of fiery missiles, even the one that had strategically hit the very last spot he’d just been, but in the nick of time darted away. Neavetsecnuac could not help but be impressed; he found himself, quietly rooting for the alien being.
At first with incredible speed and agility the creature had
ran, jumped, or ducked, successfully evading each searing bolts of electricity.
But as time wore on, not entirely escaping twentieth, thirty-fifth and then
fiftieth, it had scorched certain measure of his thin strips of flowing limbs, parts
of his backside (buttocks, rumps), and few strands of his shoulder length
scraggly hair. Each time he had let off a deafening and a heart-wrenching howl
from the excruciating pain when the lightening bolts had hit their mark. Incredibly,
even though the ground underfoot scorched and buckled, no harm whatsoever came
to Nevetsecnuac or the humans which the impostor had from time to time used as
shields. In fact, it was as if the lightening bolts and missiles were specifically
designed (genetically engineered) to bring only harm to the creature and non other.
The
arsenal of lightning bolts and missiles of scorching, blazing fires, astonishingly
simply passed right through humans with no adverse effects, targeting,
singeing, blistering, and charring only parts of the alien being.
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| 04- ALIEN BEING TORTUED |
All this while Nevetsecnuac constrained to eyewitness this horrendous onslaught had absolutely pitied the odd, wretched creature that had been at the receiving end of such extreme punishment. Nevetsecnuac, had, moreover, understood that the creature was not being penalized for escaping his incarceration, but rather, because of his innate interest in humans and for meddling in the affairs of men. The real Dwengzur, with his stone-cold heart and apparent arrogance would never have deigned to personally interact with base, contemptible human species and thus risk being contaminated; he had instead, while trespassing on human realms, concentrated his energies solely on tracking, trapping and finally disposing of, the renegade immortal, Zonar. (Of course, Nevetsecnuac, even with his most discerning mind, had only grasped part of the truth.)
The creature’s exerted vigor (energy, potency), meanwhile, in
trying to escape (avoid, shun) the frequency and accuracy of each of the
lightning bolts, had eventually taken its toll on him; seriously exhausted
(worn-out) hence, he became increasingly careless in his efforts and so,
progressively got more scalded. Black and blue and gasping for breath now, he
pleaded “Enough! Enough! I repent! I repent!"
His three- fingered hands firmly clasped in front of his face;
he fell to his bony knees and, with angst-ridden, heart-wrenching cry, implored
Dwengzur to show him mercy.
"You don’t deserve any clemency…You have not only
disrespected me, ungrateful minion, you have also caused such an iniquitous
harm to this Prince." Dwengzur ‘s resounding icy reprimand (admonishment) rattled
(shook) both Heaven and Earth.
At once the wily (sly) creature edged forward on his knees to
face Nevetsecnuac; his survival taking precedence over his pride, he struck his
forehead humbly and repeatedly on the floor as he same time abjectly begged the
prince’s forgiveness.
"My greatest crime was curiosity." he next
endeavoured to explain away his unpardonable transgressions and idiocies
(folly). "Inadvertently I’d sampled an inexplicable, a most wondrous of
human’s experience and so enticed, I wanted to feel and savour (relish) more of
it. Imprisoned (entombed) all the time in that dreadful, watery grave, my
existence is so dull and dreary! At times, I can hardly bear it! You are so
regal and just. Please, oh please do help me merciful prince; you must forgive
all my blunders and sheer madness. It was never my intention to bring you least
(any) harm; I only craved those fantastic, most exhilarating human senses, so
intolerably lacking in my sadly, deprived (disadvantaged,) world. You must
believe me, even during all my reckless undertakings; I still took great care
not to cause you any serious hurt."
“Your
harmless pranks could have had, nevertheless, grave consequences. By your own
admission (divulgence), that last stunt you pulled, could have killed me or,
far worse.” Nevetsecnuac’s
intense mental torment fresh on his mind, musing, he pensively looked away; though
he still paid heed, to the creature’s hasty (rapid), at times altogether
incomprehensible, desperate ramblings. Nevetsecnuac, meanwhile, being
compassionate, had already exonerated (absolved) the alien’s sins and besides,
he could not bear to see this odd sentient being, the like of which he had
never seen before in Wenjenkun or in his dreams, be subjected to further chastisement,
torment and abject humiliation.
"All right," he therefore, acquiesced.” Rise to your
feet; I’ve already forgiven you."
"Don't tell me." The mixed-gender-rock-sprit-entity
grumbled; as he raised his grotesquely elongated, scrawny middle-finger and,
pointed upwards. "Tell my master."
The creature’s innate nature being erratic, moreover, the
extreme pain and torture he had just endured, had all at once dissipated any
trace of goodness in him. Reverted to his former self, he again concurrently,
was envious and detested this prince Nevetsecnuac; furthermore, he blamed the
prince, for his prior stoic resistance and consequently, the extended linger,
resulting in his capture.
Suppressing his emotional soup roiling (churning) in his chest,
however, his jealousy, grudging respect
and admiration, bitterness and spite, human’s
enviable capacity for the forsaken virtues such as love, loyalty, hope, mercy, which
he lacked- with incredible performance
of mimicking grace (poise, charm) , self-effacement and meekness, he then beseeched the prince in sincerest tone
hence, to plead for him, to soften his master’s hard heart… To spare him from
more punishment and have him instead, be exonerated.
Nevetsecnuac had of course sensed the creature’s chaotic
onslaught of mixed emotions and his psychosis (mental illness) fueling his
tragic tendencies, as well the sentiment of goodness alongside sporadic bouts
of resurgent hostility, all coexisting in this clearly damaged alien being. These
were all traits (tell-tale-signs) of one being subjected to long time abuse; Nevetsecnuac
pitying the creature hence, understanding also that his own life was also in
peril (because of his contact with Zonar), he bravely stepped forward and
bowing, respectfully addressed this invincible foe, the real Dwengzur, still up
in the clouds. As means to distract him, in his resounding voice then, he
eloquently articulated (enunciated) the creature’s perceived impetus (drives)
to gain joy through harmless, human experiences. He then asked, on behalf of
the creature, for him to be shown apt leniency and be forgiven for his past
sins, as curiosity had been solely, without malice, at the root of all his
misdeeds. Showing great generosity of heart, he also pointed out that no
serious (irreparable) harm had been done to him.
Once he had been so graciously addressed by Nevetsecnuac,
Dwengzur in concordance with protocol reluctantly, riding down the clouds
descended from the sky to appear in his true form before the prince.
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| 05- THE DWENGZUR |
Though the impostor had been able to mimic the physical attributes of the Immortal, Nevetsecnuac now realized how the creature had failed to capture the true essence and power of this supreme being. This presence was too omnipotent, too supercilious (arrogant, snobbish) to be contained by any mimesis (form of mimicry), Nevetsecnauc could use this perceived weakness, if their paths adversely (negatively) crossed again, against this haughty Immortal.
Dwengzur’s harsh gaze meanwhile, with unreadable concept (thought,
view), had all this while been affixed (pinned, fastened) on the terrified,
quivering, most pitiful creature. Though if truth be known, it was only an act;
meanwhile, the creature had inwardly ascertained (felt) that he had a secret
ally now in Nevetsecnuac. Dwengzur was amused by this fanciful notion of the
creature, dismissing it as foolish yearning that was of no consequence.
"Very well." the long-awaited pardon came after a
suspended pause. "Never forget; you owe your salvation to this cordial,
merciful Prince. But be warned, regardless of any circumstance, one more future
transgression, however miniscule, will beget you an everlasting imprisonment in
a that watery grave you abhor so much. Or better still, I will have the couple
of Exterminators permanently end your puny (trifling) existence."
"Thank you for your clemency master!” The alien being took in a shuddering breath
and vehemently promised: “From hence I promise to curb (curtail) my wayward
innate nature and to eternally stay within the bounds of prescribed conduct.”
“Sure, you will” Dwengzur’s
distrustful, hard gaze lingered on the creature for a time; then, turned away
and softening, he squarely faced Nevetsecnuac (who had successfully by then,
with his sheer willpower, obstructed and checked the Immortal’s stealthy
scrutiny (perusal). His bluff worked; in absence of least trace of fear,
therefore, duped into believing there is nothing worthwhile to seek from this
insignificant mortal, Dwengzur with decorum bowed his head ever so slightly, in
formal greeting.
Keeping in mind Earth’s mandatory (routine) protocols,
Dwengzur perfunctorily expressed his pleasure at meeting Nevetsecnuac and then
evenly apologized for the unwarranted upset caused by his charge (ward) Samnuk;
however, he purposely left out the rest of the sentence: my bane, the most
bothersome, mixed gender rock spirit entity from the subjugated species,
Cassars!
Nevetsecnuac felt the hairs on the back of his neck rise as he
boldly met the Immortal's pupils, those penetrating and censorious eyes on an
expressionless face, a stony mask devoid of any warmth or compassion, and
affably reciprocated the formal greeting. He would nevertheless forever retain
the memory of intense peril and the sensation of swimming in those infinite
gray eyes, a dark, vacant abyss without the least shred of any sentiment and as
void as the infinite space itself.
The Immortal had perceived this keen sense in Nevetsecnuac but
being prejudiced, indifferently, had already turned once more to fix his
granite gaze back on Samnuk. "Well, what are you waiting for,” in an
austere (stern) voice, he commanded, "assume your true (authentic) form at
once."
Samnuk bowed abjectly (with humility) to his master then, in a
burst of light, reverted to, Nevetsecnuac's great surprise, his original
(appearance) shape. With a potent dignity Dwengzur had levitated the talisman,
which differed only in minuscule detail from that of Zonar’s, and after it had
contained Samnuk, summoned it back to the chain around his neck.
Noting Nevetsecnuac's
remorse (empathy), Dwengzur evenly intoned, "Don't fret over it; Samnuk is
a narcissistic, unfeeling entity that feeds on chaos. Your world will be lot
safer now; but no need to thank me."
He then haughtily stepped on the cloud and commanded it to begin its
ascent. Instantly he was whisked upwards to disappear through the ragged
opening where the dome of the roof once was. A thunderclap followed and then
came the deafening roar of a certain incomprehensible command which caused all
the rubble to rise determinedly up into the air and be swiftly rearranged back
into their original places (position).
Nevetsecnuac watched in amazement as the dome and walls
promptly (in a flash) repaired themselves; then, abruptly, all about him went
pitch black. As he stood there blinded by the blackness, he could feel the
memory of those implausible (phantastic) events slipping away from him into
oblivion (slipping out of his mind into nothingness, the void).
(END OF SECTION 8)





