LEGEND OF NEVETSECNUAC - ON THE WAY TO THE CAPITAL - SECTION 16
At a safe distance Nevetsecnuac brought the horse to a halt, with a purpose of discarding the load of game into a roadside ditch to unburden the horse and gain more speed. Suddenly however, from the far-away dense forest’s edge, he spotted a woodcutter emerging and inclined to do a good turn, spurred the horse off the road and over the rougher terrain towards him.
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01- LOOKING AT THE WOODS |
Nevetsecnuac hailed the woodsman, then halted his mount at hearing range of the other; catching his eye, he then graciously inclined his head and after a polite greeting, pointed at the load of game at the back of the mare and next, generously offered the woodcutter, as gift, the entire load of game.
The stalwart, middle-aged tall
man, hardly believing his ears, dropped his bundle of firewood and rushed
forward enthusiastically to accept the load (furs and carcasses) that
Nevetsecnuac had offered him.
At midpoint of his
advance, however, the man's face suddenly, unexpectedly clouded over with deep
concern and, abruptly halting his step, he locked both arms to his sides. Shaking his head in adamant refusal, he knitted
his brows and, sizing Nevetsecnuac up and down with suspicion, dubiously asked,
"And why should you want to do that…us, being strangers and all
that?"
His meaning was all too
clear, and his tone spoke volumes. He
was accusing Nevetsecnuac of theft or even worse.
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02-WOODSMAN 2 |
Nevetsecnuac, who was about to dismount and unpack the load from the horse, hesitated, a dark shadow crossing his face and he presently regretted his prior decision not to simply discard the game at the roadside. As it were, another in his place, finding the woodcutter's scrutiny unwarranted and his suspicions highly offensive, would have at least berated the wretch on the spot for his ungrateful and rude conduct.
Nevetsecnuac, however, had remarkably
constrained his deep disappointment and disregarding the slight (slur) , had
inclined his head to first introduce himself, using an alias he had concocted
on the spot; then, with eloquence and dignity, strove to allay (dispel) the
woodcutter’s fears and qualms by assuring latter (other) that the game had been
honestly attained. The only hindrance, however, lay in Nevetsecnuac’s inability
to invent, a most plausible explanation as to, why he would hunt so much game
just to discard it all away to mere stranger in the middle of nowhere.
Highly suspicious
woodcutter’s response by rights should not have been that much of a surprise; characteristically,
with eyes narrowed, snarling, woodcutter had typically just then burst, “What
do you take me for? I’m not a simpleton in some border town you can easily
manipulate! No, I won't buy any of this.
You're most definitely up to no good and, if I were to accept this booty
(as your accomplice,) it will surely land me in serious trouble. You don't even talk like a hunter. You're no common man, more like a …” He paused briefly as his mind searched for
words like academic, official, scholar? “And
you're certainly not from these parts.
There's no use denying it, I've lived here practically all my life. You're definitely not from here and you're
most certainly up to some mischief."
With each utterance his voice had become louder and (threatening)
hostile then, brandishing his axe, he menacingly stepped forward and (spitting
venom, simply) glared at Nevetsecnuac.
"I may be a rough
woodcutter to you, but I can still fight as well as any seasoned squaddie (soldier,
private, warrior). Go find yourself
another stooge to pin your heinous crimes on." As he spoke, the man was inwardly cursing the
infirmities heaped on him by his hard existence. “In my
heyday (prime), I'd overcome this brute in an instant; then, thief that he is,
I could’ve turned him over to the authorities and get me a big, fat reward,
instead of uttering idle threats and wasting my breath.” He inwardly scoffed (jeered).
"As you wish,”
Nevetsecnuac was beginning to lose patience; but then on second thought, he
again forced constraint on his temper and ejected evenly, "I'm sorry if I
have unintentionally caused you unwarranted trepidation and much undue anxiety,
sir. Please accept my sincerest
apologies. I will trouble you no
longer."
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03- NEVETSECNUAC THE HUNTER 14- JP |
Nevetsecnuac steered (turned, coxed) his mount around to leave this ungrateful woodcutter; his intention was to discard the amassed game, carcasses, secured on the back of the mare, somewhere else, anywhere but here, and further along the route the better.
The shrewd and lithe
(nimble) woodcutter, meanwhile, had vacillated in his resolve, though only for
a spell, regretting his hasty rebuff. “Could he have misjudged this youth? He
should have trusted his prior instinct, instead of letting fear and disbelief cloud
his judgement, perhaps erroneously. But no,” his stubborn heart rebuffed it;
his inner caution resurfacing again.
“Why should he make me such a generous gift, unless
there is mischief involved?”
His
brain colluding (scheming) had rattled on, while machinating thoughts alongside
registering in lightning speed, forced his mind to further consider all aspects
with more clarity and depth, to arrive at sly plot.
Certainly, game was prevalent in the mountains, but
the land was equally perilous and riddled with pitfalls and the amount of game the
solitary hunter had had with him, as competent as he appeared, still told of at
least a week's worth of effort. Why
should the hunter discard it all, when he could easily make a handsome profit
for the lot, in town?
Then again, with his (woodcutter’s) own meager sustenance, why should he
let this good fortune pass him by?
Heaven had delivered this into his calloused hands, would it not be
better to invite the hunter to his shack, drug and then deliver (deposit) him bound
and gagged before the authorities? Why
should he, because of prudence (caution and fear), let this golden opportunity slip
through his fingers? Yes, the trick may well work; he had just enough
belladonna left, after the last use.
For a moment his heart was downcast, thinking how he’d
worked so hard to bury his past, endured so much in this isolated corner… but still
that brute had tracked him down then dared to threaten to expose him…. The Woodcutter
had just then momentarily shifted focus onto the deep, ugly scar on his left hand;
an involuntary shudder just then rippled through him, recollecting that last
spontaneous act and the consequential perilous brush with death. He had got exactly what he deserved! The Woodcutter
inwardly hissed then shook his head to expunge all those unwelcome thoughts,
forcing his attention to the present situation. In the end he nodded his
head, having decided already on how to deal with this present dilemma, then with
incredible agility of a wildcat, rushed at once, with open arms (with one arm
still holding the axe however), showing he meant no harm, to stoically (with stoicism)
block the hunter’s path.
With the fire in his eyes burning
with steel determination and, his left hand still gripping the axe, the
woodcutter stonily stared up at Nevetsecnuac for a time, his unruly mind,
meanwhile, racing with new possibilities.
Just as quickly however, his focus snapped back to present reality and
with unreadable expressions on his face then, his eyes betraying nothing, however,
his voice carrying urgent, apologetic tone, he yowled (yelped) at the mounted
youth: "Wait! Please wait!”
With uncanny agility and
stubbornness, he next rushed forward to tug at the hunter’s (Nevetsecnuac’s)
trouser leg. "I…I do
apologize. Please forgive me, generous
sir. I lost my head there for a
spell. Times are hard, very hard, and
one can't be too careful these days, you know.
You could have been a government agent, secret police, some spy, or simply
an affiliate henchman. How could I, a poor old woodcutter with failing
eyesight, decipher the truth anymore?
Everything is getting more secretive; more complex all the time. Please don't hold my blunder against me. I know now in my heart that I've done you
grievous wrong and for that I'm truly, deeply ashamed. Say that you forgive me." He entreated (implored) Nevetsecnuac in
seeming sincerity, giving him no chance to respond.
"I discern now that you're
an honest chap." The woodcutter incessantly continued with his honeyed
words. "So, let us put aside these obvious misunderstandings, all
right? I will graciously accept your
most generous gift. You must permit me,
in return, to repay your kindness and, as well, atone for my mistakes. Why don't you come with me for a hot
meal? My wife is a good cook and can prepare
a dozen or so savory dishes in the blink of an eye. The way you're heading, you won't see an inn
or hostel for at least three, five days’ ride.
Please accept a hot meal and a night's lodging from this old man."
“Savory dishes; an odd choice of words for a crude (an
unsophisticated) woodsman(woodcutter). I doubt he even has a wife.” Nevetsecnuac,
losing patience, but only inwardly, coolly rebuffed (snubbed); then outwardly shaking
his head, in an even tone just stated that he could not unfortunately spare the
time and with a definite no nonsense demeaner, spurred his horse forward.
The old man, forced aside,
immediately dropped all pretenses and with his dark countenance, grinding his
teeth, once more hurled curses and treats after Nevetsecnuac.
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04- WOODSMAN |
Checking his rising fury, Nevetsecnuac reminded himself that the woodsman (woodcutter) was only a victim of his circumstances, was acting out of fear and therefore not entirely responsible for his erratic behavior; nevertheless, with sadness gripping his heart, he half turned to take one last long look at the enraged woodsman, and with just a slight nod of his head he calmly bid him farewell, then simply rode off into distance.
He did not look back nor lend an ear to the
mounting torrent of abuse and curses let loose (heaped after him) by the highly
incensed, indignant woodsman.
~
Riding into the distance, Nevetsecnuac was for a time (spell)
despondent (downhearted) and also bit concerned that the old man might report
this incident to the authorities, until; he reminded himself that, the rest of
his journey would be spent under the alias of Fradel Rurik Korvald.
Later, with twilight (dusk, sunset) fast approaching, at some
distant spot, as he discarded the pelts (furs) and carcasses (meat) of game
into a gravel ditch, he quietly admonished himself for his careless act of
going out of his way to do a good turn and, for being too trusting.
“You must
harden your heart if you are to succeed.” Zonar's cryptic warning
suddenly came to mind.
Nevetsecnuac nodded,
thus resolved to follow that good counsel.
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05- NEVETS ON HORSEBACK |
With the load lightened and the road ahead flat and featureless, Nevetsecnuac, with one fluid motion, mounted the mare and taking up the reigns, spurred her into a full gallop. For several hours, they rode like the wind, with the mare's hooves barely touching the ground, covering great distances even though the darkness had encroached on the land.
Nevetsecnuac would have ceaselessly continued riding all night
long till down, since the ominous clouds had by now been quickly swept away with the relentless
winds, allowing the starry sky with full moon, to perfectly illuminate the desolate
(remote segment of state highway) thoroughfare; however, for his mount’s sake
(mare not being Fiery Comet), they halted at a safe spot for a brief respite
and for (intake of) sustenance.
~
(END OF SECTION 16)
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